Black Poetry : DO U MINE"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Do
    u
    mine
    can i be me
    and happy
    do u
    mine
    if i do it my way
    not to hurt
    but love evry day
    do u
    mine
    that i spray these colors
    and make rainbows
    can i
    if u don't mine
    drop tears
    like the clustered rain
    if u don't mine
    i've struggled
    just like u
    i know the deep pain
    that was paid and laid
    before me
    if u don't mine
    can i just be me
    and fill hearts with joy
    and love to see
    if u
    don't
    mine
    can i
    fight my war i see fit
    and sho the grace of it
    can i cry out my fears
    in sweet wayz
    the change is there
    the links are connected
    but i have to be me
    if u
    don't
    mine
    i've walked the roads
    and many miles
    my feet raw
    my mind weary
    my heart is broken
    my thoughts shattered
    my handz tied
    yet i'm not in shackles
    nor hit by whips
    the chain that bound me
    is u
    can i be me
    if
    u
    don't mine
    i've beat the streets
    and speaked n' preached
    done been to the end
    of the rope
    i hold da deepest hope
    my journey is mines
    the path i walk i made
    u can't guide me
    u can't tell me
    u can't unfold me
    i am a MAN of my own
    desires and destiny
    my dynasty is real
    the power of my own
    is real
    the pass is real
    of yeateryears tears
    and today fight of fears
    for tomorrow's dreams
    so i
    ask
    if
    u
    don't
    mine!
    can
    I
    be just simple old ME Please!
    :eek:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes yes!!!! you can be you....
    love this...work it i am feelin
    this all the way...you go boy!!!lol
    p.s do sound like ya told me off...
     
  3. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes... you be you...... but remember always keep it real with whatever you might do..... This was tyte.....
     
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    my goodness
    this is wonderful
    quote:"the chain that bond me is you"
    awww very deep
    this is indeed
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, you can be you
    You can do the simple things that make you "YOU"
    You can cry a river if that's fits your do
    But deep in your heart that's where you truly remain you
    And nobody can stop that no matter what you've been through
    So keep your head up $$RICH$$ and continue bein' you, boo

    Tha poem was tyte. I felt tha vibez. I truly felt this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u all ......blkangel , Da1 , blue.....

    see i wanted to know
    coz i am me sweet
    and compassionately
    i've been in the heart
    of real struggle
    i've had no emotions
    i've played in the mud
    live in the lost dreams
    yet my faith & hope
    stood up and dear GOD " i'm here !
    i wanna know
    if they
    didn't mine
    me being me
    true to my self
    for the world to see
    can't change me
    i can't be copy
    and from my humble heart
    i thank u all for feeling me
    and letting me be me !!!!

    HAPPY.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll let you be you any tyme
    Day or night tyme
    Cause deep in my heart I know you are just being you
    No matter what you've been through
    There is always hope even for the loniest of man
    All you have to do is be you and say "I can!"
    I'm always with you brother just like you were with me
    Always believe that, I'm afar but I will always love thee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cindy.........
    indeed to be
    ever so free
    i must truely be me
    as u are u
    for what we are
    even in the far
    of starz
    u be u
    and me be me
    is all the world need
    to see
    yes in the highest of
    love
    i am from above
    and i thank thee
    for letting me be me !

    FOXYYYYYYYY!!
    i've been down the
    hards of tyme
    yet my heart
    continue to shine
    i am me as to see
    and very happy
    for a sistah like thee
    i know the struggle
    we all face
    and what took place
    and now i stand in the
    heart of time
    to continue the freedom
    of mines
    so i say i am me
    who i wanna be
    this
    all
    I ask
    just to be sweet old me !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    And again I ask
    if
    u
    don't
    mine
    that
    my heart
    beat in the
    soundz of yours
    and play the freedom
    songz to be me
    and allow
    my
    handz
    to
    creat
    the
    wordz
    my
    heart
    and mind
    lone to
    write
    and hear
    my beckon
    call
    to the
    realm
    of me
    i am only one man
    i will never stop
    to get the quest
    of many and
    sho by the feet & handz
    my burns and struggle
    even when i move to
    the other side
    of
    life
    my spirit
    will
    remain
    to be me
    and continue
    the
    gift
    GOD
    gave me
    and that's to be me
    if
    u
    don't
    MINEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this speaks out...loud and clear
    take you for who you are...
    in just being you...
    its what make you...the person you are...
    i enjoyed this here flow so i came back
     
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