Black Poetry : DO U KNOW WHAT U WANT

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    women n men confuse themselves with what they want in a relationship
    i prove everybody wrong cuz my calculation is
    how can u know what u want when we live in a world where technology n time changes
    n improves everything in it
    for instinct
    a new n advance cellphone,computer or any electronic
    was loved n wanted back in the day
    n everybody said it was somethin great
    but people keep changin thier minds
    so many times that in the future it becames a waste
    cuz they have a chance n they took that chance 2 upgrade
    all im tryin 2 say is carefully make ur decisions
    hope n pray God helps n guide us thru our life mission
    do all dat u can 2 be happy but that dont mean u should do wrong
    dont believe da right one will neva come along
    because of a few mistakes dont mean u should give up,no u gotta be strong
    think about all the single mothers they thought he was right
    till da baby was born
    n the man was gone
    now how did mr.right become mr.wrong
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    More often then none we don't know , just take it day by day
    as it comes but we do know to make our own change we see fit.
    i hear ya
     
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    Seasons change; feelings change; and people change...deep:spinstar:

    :read:

    :picture:
     
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    The ending was wicked. Real nice.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    ITS FUNNY YOU MENTION THESE THINGS BECAUSE I TOO AM A SINGLE MOTHER AND WONDER HOW MR.RIGHT BECAME MR. WRONG BUT ITS NO MISTERY AS YOU SAY TIME CHANGES THINGS AND PEOPLE DEFINATELY CHANGE. I THANK YOU FOR THE ENCOURAGING WORDS TELLING US NOT TO GIVE UP,
    THIS FLO REALLY HIT HOME
    THANK YOU

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thats y write 2 give hope in anyway i can

    got luv 4 ma people.1

    thanks.
     
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    If this isn't the truth?
    Then I don't know what the truth is.
    I loved this.
     
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    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u.
     
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    word...thas on the strength poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks brother Khasm13.
    peace