Poetry Critiques : DO U KNOW WHAT U WANT

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    women n men confuse themselves with what they want in a relationship
    i prove everybody wrong cuz my calculation is
    how can u know what u want when we live in a world where technology n time changes
    n improves everything in it
    for instinct
    a new n advance cellphone,computer or any electronic
    was loved n wanted back in the day
    n everybody said it was somethin great
    but people keep changin thier minds
    so many times that in the future it becames a waste
    cuz they have a chance n they took that chance 2 upgrade
    all im tryin 2 say is carefully make ur decisions
    hope n pray God helps n guide us thru our life mission
    do all dat u can 2 be happy but that dont mean u should do wrong
    dont believe da right one will neva come along
    because of a few mistakes dont mean u should give up,no u gotta be strong
    think about all the single mothers they thought he was right
    till da baby was born
    n the man was gone
    now how did mr.right become mr.wrong
     
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    A questionable thing
    this reads like open questions of how and why
    with no break .