Black Poetry : do u hear me?????

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 17, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beatin my head
    against a wall
    do u hear
    you cant hear me….
    See strive to learn what ya can..
    Don’t let it pass ya by..
    A fool can be smart..
    Just dippin in some
    Knowledge
    Hit the books….
    Learn all you can…
    Beatin my head
    Against the wall
    I can preach
    Tell ya all
    ya need to know
    And then I am back out searchgin for mo\
    My struggles are my own
    My lessons are mine….
    That I share…..
    Get a book
    Grab that pen
    Listen to all that was plan…
    Set up on dis here
    Earth
    For a reason
    Not your plan
    It was GOD”S
    Plan.
    Find your way
    For it is in you…
    Free will to do
    To teach
    To learn..
    Make a plan….
    You don’t hear me…
    Knowledge is the key…
    Leave some…

    I can go on and on ..
    But it is for you to learn….
    He is a mighty one
    Most forgiven and
    Will hold ya hand
    When no one else will
    Share you thoughts
    Hold your angry
    Don’t fight
    Just pass it by…
    This was not a poem just sumthin
    I was feelin…
    And I use to preach working with
    My babies
    (the kids in juvenile)..lol
    yes I was the #1 head group
    leader correctional officer
    for 9 years…
    sad stories
    and lonely
    most of them got prey on…
    livin a lie…
    livin and raisen themselves…
    life is a trip
    I do agree
    But for our kids to suffer
    Shame is in our land…..
    beatin my head
    against a wall
    do u hear
    you cant hear me….
    walkin back into eternal light…
    but i will b back...
    a blkangel thang....:kiss:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribe ....felt every lick of da pen
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich.....
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was GOD”S
    Plan.
    Find your way
    For it is in you…

    - mzblkangel

    That's something an angel would say, bless you!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heeeeey flow on my sista flow on :)
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read....triniti424

    1poetsought...An ANEL indeed....

    Listen to all that was plan…
    Set up on dis here
    Earth
    For a reason
    Not your plan
    It was GOD”S
    Plan.
    thanks for the read
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful work...really and truthful. and thank you so much.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you true love
    for your read...
     
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    MOS' DEF, THIS WAS PROFOUND!:eek: :eek:
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you...so kind...
    but its in the plan...
    without him
    i wouldnt be able ta hold
    the pen
    i use...
    it all begins with him...
    so credit i cant take alone...
    glad you enjoyed your read
     
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