Black Poetry : Do This (hey yall critique please)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Jun 16, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m grabbing flavor while cats babbling major with the neighbor
    From house to house like a mouse that **** will arouse my behavior
    They hate I wear tight bling and do the right thing like Spike Lee
    They don’t like me so I’m ill like jungle fever or strike three //
    Just some shrewd dudes with attitudes, like cry babies in wet diapers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol..........brutha u really bring a snap to the flow
    i like dis
     
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    and you are you
    and no other
    wonderful flow
    my brother
    very cool
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ AND BLUEWATER THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YO
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD my brown round butt do wild twist but my style resists
    Deadbeats on misled streets they all wanna give me a kiss
    Got thick fannies and quick panties but duck slick candies
    That involve **** that throb on the block like vigilantes
    Mind plush to any alert have to brush off dirt they try rush
    Under my mini-skirt and get plenty work had to tell one guy hush
    Because a thug flow love crud and throw mud like a rainstorm
    Stain form in my underwear just thunder there but plain calm
    With what I hear, its sex forever but be complex and clever
    Booty perk in leather hips work together like nylon fibers, endeavors
    Guide the thighs of a girl, world of men tries to glide between
    The cream coo-chee lips, trips me out my slip no doubt schemed
    To get lifted, OK MADD in the parking lot sparkling hot
    Talking to a boy wanna toy my coo-chee this dawg barking a lot
     
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