Black Poetry : Do the Right Thing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jan 7, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do the Right Thing

    Have peace in my quotes just have to increase the volts
    To amplify brains, it builds my fate to illustrate to folks
    My rhymes are designed to spill not kill never dampen hopes
    Look I’m sick and corrupt with the hiccups and I still kick
    Butts, no cure for this pure funk and it sure stunk real quick
    When the lid was open left kids hoping they can rhyme like this
    My fairy tale trees got hairy leaves and rough clusters of blooms
    And tough hustlers are doomed if they approach my ill tunes
    These white flowers has might and powers with some perfumes
    Smell but deadly like music from hell some tell of truths no doubt
    My verbal storm strongly astounds this form is only founded on routes
    To perfection but face stout rejections for critics have to swim like trouts
    To escape the amusing fake accusing these snakes of using my ill rhymes
    To hill climb they’re blind like Jack and Jill fetch a pale of wine designed
    To fall down and waste grape juice all around, my substance catch a fire
    While I dispatch wire to telephone poles, now strong bowls of soups I desire
    Not even Cambelle’s chicken noodle soup can handle this feudal group of can
    Foods I stand rude with a can opener and plate of rice I ate nice yall understand
    Amalgamate rhythm just to evaluate wisdom it’s foul to take criticism from fans
    The wrong way your dome could play tricks on ya like the GETO BOYS
    Featuring Scarface doing a bazaar pace of rapping
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 up bruh ! i feel ya here ....words leak like candy in a lyrical treat
    ya just due is coming wait and see fo real ..............keep spiting the game
    doing what u do soon da world will pick up on da clue and you !!!

    Tyte scribing Rhymebad
     
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    felt the beat of this...

    the rhythm came quick...and it flowed.

    NICELY DONE.
     
  4. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed your use of visuals here rhymebad, do your thang.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YALL
     
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