Black Poetry : Do The Right Thing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jan 29, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do The Right Thing

    Rapping is sad stuff, adjust to rhymes must duck crime
    And bring the realness, feel this in the right way to align
    My life ebonic perfect like an electronic circuit very shocking
    Knocking down telephone pole my dome swoll end up blocking
    Knowledge, stay mean like a machine lube my vocal chords
    I’m the local lord of rap yall, fakes confess I make progress toward
    Success, got dem groove gonna improve one and move along
    Microphones go forward and straight coordinate avoid the wrong
    Plain occupation and there’s a strain in the population
    Seem to drain the Hip Hop nation women we need cooperation
    In having sex stop grabbing the kotex other words ladies
    We need babies, alert in rap but my work is trapped by crazies
    Most cats are jerks perhaps, see a girl in a mini-skirt with a bra strap
    Thugs thunder with endurance at the club under the influence of overlap
    Kisses which twistses my lips fiddle with a beauty get little less duty
    In sex. Can’t stop doing rhymes got hot brewing lines like perking
    Coffee, jerking softies off of microphones because my raps working
    On their brains and hurting their mainframes wearing caps and alerting
    Teams, bent quotes and then rent boats drown clowns overboard, lyrics
    Nice and hard these cats gonna need a lifeguard so yo can yall float?
    My thoughts are blank and vexed crank my Lex allow it to run and hope
    To somehow gun down success and duck stress
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's whats up too .....fo real
     
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    Hi rhymebad
    So true
    It's another responsibility
    When you lock words and
    Rock verbs the beat can
    Become majestic. So we
    All need to do the Right thing
    So the young solders can learn
    the lesson Plan. And let it roll again


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Should one rap to please the mainstream, or to write what's real? Flow what you know.
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tight rhymebad!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on RhymeBad!!!!
    Serious flows from you Bruh
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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    Rapper's Delight

    We Ain't judging,

    JUST LOVING :10200:

    MUCH RESPECT, Rhymebad
     
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