Quiet Poetry Lounge : Do Not Worry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No need to worry Brother
    I won’t out you in my
    House of serenity and blessings
    This stage was built for the
    Weight of Kings not for the
    Fancy of fools and not
    All their foolish things
    Filthy, convoluted. I pity you
    I remain untouched, unscathed
    By your treachery and betrayal
    Because I walk in the light
    You think you took from me
    Mal-aligned and misinformed
    You took from you and
    All the blessings normally
    Bestowed upon the righteous
    No need to worry Brother
    I will not out you in my
    House of serenity and blessings
    This stage was built for the
    Weight of Kings and maybe
    If you stay here long enough
    Their beauty will infiltrate
    The ugly selfishness of you
    :zipit:
     
  2. soulFAreal

    soulFAreal Active Member MEMBER

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    eye c u.........

    I COULD SEE THAT SISTA THRU AND THRU.........
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice script, IfU...too bad so sad...keep it movin, and don't even worry about how much dust you're kicking up in the process. Keep it movin like U-haul...^5
    :welldone:
    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now ......u droppin da script
     
  5. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    hmmmm....."The House o Serenity and Blessings"......that sounds so beautiful...
    another tight drop, softly...i pity the fool who crossed your path, and missed out on all the blessings....

    another great write, by a very deep artist....which is what you are....

    "infinte moons could not replace your shine."
     
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