Black Poetry : Do me a favor!!!!!

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do me a favor
    Just leave
    Leave me in this misery of pool
    Leave me you fool
    I'm tired of us not blossoming like fresh roots peaking from the ground
    No sounds
    of laughter as they die within our souls
    I lie next to a corspe that has no life
    I lie next to the one who has bitterness as his motivation
    Looking into the mirror I see a figure with a blackened veil
    After five years I see I've have fell
    into a darken place
    Oh lord replace these clouds with sunny days
    Make my heavy burden become lighter
    Allow me to walk amongst the clouds
    while my feet feel the way to progression road
    I can't believe I'm here, I'm here with you
    Its time for me to move on from you
    So please do me a favor
    LET ME GO!​
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What anguish you so aptly describe.

    Keep HOPE ALIVE
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow didn't know you had them kind of eyes and fine thighs your booty bounce with the rhymed vibes you have true flavor ready to do you a favor, like perform and execute and swarm your fruit like bees on crack dang boo your booty is fine so it's my duty at all times to rap to you I can have fun with your circus and everything will be done on purpose we can do a play on broadway, your cake above the rim we can make a film like Chris Brown and Twista kiss renown we can blister sheets, I mean your body fry hot and i'll try not break the head boards, and if any guests arrive they'll see me sucking your breasts and jive, girl we can do the dishes with true kisses while itching in the kitchen get stripped quick wearing red lipstick so your cosmetics make me energetic girl
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lipss: thanks for the love and um rhyme bad:qqb018:
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey there sis! that was well said.. and tears welled up in my eyes as i felt ur words hit home.

    miss ya way with words girl!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i miss you to poetic thanks for the love!
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    lookin at pic sista...i wouldnt be too quick to leave either...:qqb011:

    Great capture, tho...you nailed the anxiety perfectly.....
     
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