Black Poetry : Do It Up

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do It Up

    Rap is possible but some trap the gospel with wrong
    Interpretations of the bible revelation disciples for a long
    Time has warned us, write tall posts and they almost certainly
    Right, and it’s hurting me at night to see mistakes alerting my
    Sight, I’m above sea level and see the devil and duck swift
    But if he catch me who knows the out come? Not a good gift
    Distinguish folks use proper English in their quotes to uplift
    Their words and that’s absurd when you’re not saying anything
    Comes to sex I caress the pleasure and the best measure is to kiss
    First to quench the brisk thirst, math bloom and prevail like this
    On a bathroom scale weigh forty pounds got a shorty renown
    Post get no respond so I go beyond and discover the limits of towns
    Where timid clowns are located and on a lonely day the only way
    To cheer up is eat a Kondyke bar hear me learn to fear this G OK?
    A bad romance deserves an apology but advanced technology curves
    And bury worlds but these fool call it magic and that’s tragic for us words
    Can’t explain this phenomenon in suspense need common sense just
    To half way understand, in this very world wore a Jherri curl and must
    Spray juice so it stay loose to comb I kept it wet and soothing but its
    Yet to be proven that this move improved my appearance a little bit
    Stem with rhythm and this is symbolism to HIPHOP got a dew rag
    Crave as the flag wave over America mad flave and character drag
    On in my mind, look rap is too serious a matter to entrust to rappers
    There must be chapters of knowledge available first for those captors
    It’s a forever fight it’s better to write for my self and have no public
    And glow in the subject of HIPHOP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 up this was phat.............
     
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    thanks for the props rich

    “Convinced in fashion that intense passion can bring about
    Oceans of emotion and girl your potion is delicious no doubt
    I’m a thug in this nation but a love sensation is caused by
    Your hips and sexy lips live and remisce give me a kiss sugar pie
    Honey bun, we could have dinner and romance and winners advance
    To the bedroom, girl there’s a presence of absurd heat lets dance