Black Poetry : Do It For Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Dec 28, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold my hand…
    Create experiences all new,
    Remind me that there will always be two,
    And that when it’s time,
    Where there is me,
    There will be you.

    Hug me…
    Make all my troubles fade,
    Make all my days made,
    Make all my bad times outweighed,
    By the good you bring in my life,
    By the good that I know is in you.

    Hold me…
    Secure my faith,
    That my fragile heart is safe,
    And I was worth your wait,
    And that you will cherish every moment like this,
    Like this…kiss…

    …Me,
    And seal every verbal love letter,
    That you expressed,
    Not just to make me feel better,
    Or to break down my barriers,
    For us to have sex…

    But instead you cause me to forget,
    Every hurt, every pain,
    Every storm, every rain,
    Adverse effect, hurricane.
    Whatever belief in love I lost,
    Twice as much is gained…
    And even when you leave,
    Your spirit will remain,
    Here with me…
    Baby…Do it for me!
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a very nice poetic plea
    i hope that he
    does it for thee....

    one love
    khasm
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems as though he has done it for you in the past, and hopefully he will remain that special someone for you. Concisely written, flow on poet.
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, you always have such wicked tight flows. This one's no exception.
     
  5. NNQueen

    NNQueen going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This was beautifully crafted and written...if love like this was possible, it could be a beautiful thing!

    Great job Chastity...

    Queenie :spinstar:
     
  6. escot44

    escot44 New Member MEMBER

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    that was a beautiful piece