Black Poetry : DO IT AGAIN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Oct 5, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thinking: DO IT AGAIN
    A little free write

    One thought on the night, and it brought me chills
    Relaxation wrapped up in body tention
    A feel thats unreal
    Was it chemistry, a perfect mixture
    A blend of unique
    A dabble of you
    A little of me
    The nights, suttle treat
    A taste of sweetness,
    From a sweaty kiss
    A feel of weakness
    From loves engulfing abyss
    One night, one stand
    Two bodies one man
    You as my lady
    Such a thrill
    This was a night to remember
    TheONE that sended me chills
    Can you feel the pressure
    Still amassed in our bodies
    Can we go for round 2
    Reinact our little party!
    One night, One stand
    You were the lady
    I was the man
    Can you feel the sincerity
    The tingle in my hand
    As I touch you and beg
    For us to do it Again!
    CAN YOU FEEL THE EMOTION
    ………………………. as I touch and beg for us to do it again! :slobber:

    BY:
    Lj
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: lol you had me with this one...wheeeew
    do it again alreay will ya....:lol:
    tight drop i am feeling it
    Angel
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks for the read, Im glad you enjoyed
     
  4. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa I'm loving this smooth scribe....feelin ya excited sincerity in the question posed.. :terrific:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't see why she would say no to dis
    one more round tonight whewwwwwwwwwwwww!!
    dis was hot and steady
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa hehehe :read: look at you brotha gettin all kinky lol flow on my brotha :)
     
  7. PositiveMindset

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    That's the way U do it...

    Leave 'em wantin' more.

    Or was it leave wantin' more, I get those mixed up sometimes.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL at Positive. Round 2....and in the corner to my right...this was a spicy drop brotha.
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whhhhaaaaaaatttt...!!! this was :hot:
     
  10. angelicsage

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    *GULP*.....

    (wiping the sweat from my brow)....

    Alrighty then...

    Somebody's trying to start forest fires up here in destee...

    Go on poet...

    U brought the heat wit this joynt...

    Flame on poet...
    one luv,
    Sage
     
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