Black Poetry : Do I Stay Or Do I Go?

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  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind
    My flesh
    My heart
    My spirit
    All say something different
    To many emotions in the mix
    To many thoughts
    To think clearly
    Do I stay or do I go
    A man of honor
    A man a lies
    A woman
    A woman trying to be a mother
    A wife
    An individual
    Caught up in the lies
    The deception
    The feeling of love
    Do I stay or do I go
    Seeing very few verbs
    Excuses
    Justification
    Why are you here
    Can I be a lone?
    Here in flesh
    Not in spirit
    Say there is a problem
    Do nothing
    Until the next offense
    Respect
    Trust
    Love
    Lust
    Devotion
    Betrayal
    Unequally yoked
    Do I stay or do I go
    Till death do us part?
    For better
    For worse
    Sickness and in health
    Nice vows
    Meaningless
    Mockery of matrimony
    Is it me?
    Do I stay or do I go
    People will get hurt
    People hurting now
    Harsh words
    Unforgivable actions
    Countless apologies
    Selfishness
    Anger
    Resentment
    Understanding
    Do I stay or do I go
    Incalculable tears
    Hold on
    Just a little longer
    Holding on to what
    A dream
    A wish
    False hope
    Hold to the promises
    The truth
    What is truth?
    Who’s truth?
    Only for a season
    Who can find a virtuous woman?
    Who can find virtuous man?
    Loyal
    Understanding
    Compassionate
    Doubt
    Mistrust
    Confusion
    Temptation
    Soul Ties
    Unbelief
    Do I stay or do I go
    Relations of the past
    Ego Boost
    Caught up in the cycle
    The cycle
    Unwilling to break the cycle
    Stop the destruction
    Start a new cycle
    Won’t break the hold
    Can’t break the hold
    Do I stay or do I go
    Dishonesty
    Deceit
    Corruption
    Cover up
    Weakness
    Strength
    Trustworthy
    Untrue to thy self
    Do I stay or do I go
    A wife
    A wife who struggles
    Proverbs 31 woman
    Who is?
    Can I be?
    A husband
    A husband not knowing
    Not knowing how to be
    Do I stay or do I go
    His Word
    God’s Word
    His covenant
    The key
    His Promises
    His word
    The Deceiver
    Immediately he comes
    To destroy
    God is not a lie
    The enemy tells many
    Broken up marriage
    Broken family
    Children caught in the cross fire
    Confused children
    Children left broken
    Lost
    Damaged
    No one to look up to
    Left to continue the cycle
    Do I stay or do I go
    Love is patient
    Love is kind
    Love is not jealous
    Love does not delight in evil
    but rejoices with the truth
    It does not envy, it does not boast
    it is not proud; it is not rude
    it is not self-seeking,
    it is not easily angered,
    and it keeps no record of wrongs
    Who is capable of love?
    Who can find love?
    Love
    Or
    Toleration
    A wise woman
    A foolish woman
    Will I build my house?
    Will I pluck it down with my hands?
    Will I be a wise woman?
    Or
    The foolish woman
    Do I stay or do I go
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    danggg my sistah dat waz raw of truths
    and on the realz
    so much mix up feelinz or emotionz
    shud u stay or shud u go, is wuh u ask?
    well i dink if luv is not derr, den leave, but it aint gon be eazy
    i waz feelin dis strong piece rite hurr
    so flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A



    BLACKLUV AND BP


    :great:

    :terrific:
     
  3. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GHETTOAMBITION
    Thanks for you response.
    I'm glad you understood it I know it was all over the place...
    Thanks again.......
     
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    deep thoughts and mix emotions flowing
    only the answer will reveal it self within
    view the mirror again for the answer is there.

    this was on point and felt beyond compare.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a really deep read. It is hard to know the truth and walk there in for so many distractions, tempatations, and trials come to make us lose focus. But like mama said it all comes to make us stronger. Prayer is always the answer to any question. Keep doing what you do my sister.
     
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    hey baby gurl cant touch ya becoming a fan of your work. keep doing what cha do gurl. oh since we cool and all can i get a autograph before you make them big dollars. see i dont want to pay for it when i can get it free now. lol.:ilu:
     
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    You are SoBlessed

    To pose these questions they are on your mind. They must be answered for you to beat time. The answer is clear in my mind for all this. Do what you ( have to do ) want and must do and all others just miss.

    Fond memories they become. Good times had wasted time. Reflect on them but not let them unwind. A bright new clear all emotion then enter the mind. Things look better and focus is clear. do it.. just make it known that the end is near. The end of confusion and all this other stuff. Enough is enough and no more. When the skeltons come running all around the room. Entertain them but put them back in their room. Love you. Love them.. but only where they fall. You have all the ingredients for a relationship. Consideration is all that is needed for this lovely life trip.

    Breaking up is not hard to do, but getting over is the thing you go thru.

    You are on point poet.
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so deep and complicated. You convey the emotional struggle so well.
    One love
     
  9. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to everyone that responed....
    Thanks for the love..............
     
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    Wow sis... just continue to TRUST and as you know, your vision will be made clear!!!
     
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