Black Poetry : Do I Miss You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UrbanPoet, Jun 7, 2005.

  1. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    Do I miss you, It's hard to tell
    But I do know that I won't continually fall to your spell
    With me you could've had the world and heaven, but you chose hell
    You'll come to regret it, again, and run back to what you know
    Will I welcome you with open arms, no I shun you, our love cannot grow
    because I've played the fool an infinate number of times for your time
    When you had you fun and want me back "NO", the answer I give, not a victory of mine
    Just my way of moving on, yeah you do hold a special place within my heart
    but for what you put me through there is no place for forgiveness, for I have became smart

    Plz keep in mind that this work isnt complete
    Also can i get some input

    P.S. Alicia AKA soulful2006 this is Definitely not about Ginai
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice surely when completed it will be a masterpiece
    flow on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you can't keep saying yes, if only just for your own sanity. Keep it flowing then poet.
     
  4. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Its just so hard to deal with a person and then force yourself to stop
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can definitely relate to some of this, but I thought this was really laid out good. hope the rest turns out as great as this part. peace
     
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    blkqueenkok New Member MEMBER

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    very nice lay-out, I liked it
     
  7. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank You, me personally I thought the layout was kinda mediocre, but i guess not
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Understandable especially because I know you. I am proud that you now understand that sometimes the best way to heal yourself and someone else is to walk away. Painful it is sure to be the sun will shine on brighter days and better ways as you coontinue to grow.
     
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    looking forward to reading the finished part of this...Touching read.


    Keep 'em coming!
    ~*~Reesecup~*~
     
  10. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you havnt really got around to finishing it but it will be posted
     
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