Black Poetry : do i make you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I Make You (As Excited As You Make Me?)

    No…I’m not talking ‘bout
    The excitement that rises
    From between open thighs
    That brings tears to your eyes
    When satisfied

    That’s not what I’m talking ‘bout

    You keep me entertained
    …Excited
    …Stimulated
    As you engage me in
    Mental laughings
    That makes my heart bounce with joy

    Does my voice touch you
    In ways others can’t begin to know

    Does the warmth show

    Does it feel good to hear my name
    Does your pulse change every time you’re near me

    Are you excited, yet?​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I bet she can't say no !!!
    you gotta watch out cause somebody done got excited and wet .....

    This was befound sensual that will make any woman holla yes yes yes !!!!
     
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    Yes, BIG DADDY, YES! LOL!


    You betta stop that kinda talk, Baller! That'll gitcha stalked, Man! :em0100: (just kidding!) But, just be careful! :wink:
     
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    Baller:
    Do you know...
    what too much excitement will do to ya
    have your mind stuck like glue on her
    body aching so good for her
    nothing you wont do for her
    cuz she's the one that
    Moves ya and soothes ya
    you dont need to ask
    cuz she already knows...


    Loved the piece...its too cute for words.

    Much Luv
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have you ever...

    ...enjoyed JUST being around someone so much that the thought of that person had you giddy with anticipation...and the love relation just made it more intense? EXCITEMENT comes in many forms.:)

    THANKS for reading
     
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    To know have that one person in your life that gives you that butterflies in the stomach feeling, and to be able to express that so well, hats off to ya, brother poet.
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a wonderful feeling when we get pass the sex, and move toward true intimacy that often takes place, just because ......we look at one another from across the room, or I see your number, or hear your voice, or the anticipation, of you coming home, or simply because you are you.Us passing in the hallway, watching you sleep, laying on your chest, listening to your heart beat.
    I dig this poem I really do, and yes.... I am so excited when I think of loving like that.
    Bless!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the beauty of love...

    ...is the magic in your lover's eye. i don't ask why. it is what it is. once that magic dims, the love fades, and the wonders of yesterday are forgotten tomorrow. KEEP THE LIGHT OF MAGIC BURNING BRIGHTLY, EVERYDAY...so you can enjoy your "rocking chair" years, together.
     
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    What an excitement to feel.
    To shiver just a lil when you think of that special someone.
    Shooo Im excited about your excitement.
    :terrific::terrific::terrific:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thatgirl...

    glad ya feeling me on this hea. i'm loving the bubbliness of you. keep feeding me with that thing you do.