Black Poetry : DO I KNOW U

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I thought i knew u
    the very first tyme
    i heard your voice
    so soft and smooth
    as summer breeze
    yet deep as thunder
    roaring in da winds

    I thought i knew u
    when i glanced deep
    into your eyez like a
    mist of innocence and
    the tame of love glaze
    your face lights up this
    radiant gleam like a newborn

    I thought i knew you
    but u enter my heart
    from a far region yet closer
    to touch through my visional
    case i see beauty
    that opens my charm box
    my love now cascading out
    choppin at the footsteps of
    your tenderness

    I thought i knew you
    when u whisper in my ear
    and when my lips partake
    da kiss u leave a overwhelming
    universe deep inside and stain
    my beings with hope that we are
    yet so far my love beckon and calls
    wonders and wishies just dreched
    and my body sail in the aftertaste
    of u that lingers inside my memories
    i treasure and a river of rushing
    romance awaken

    I thought i knew u
    but this creative love
    has caught me by suprise
    and my heart welcome u
    can we be a us just the two
    because i'm loving u . :?:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like you knew her in some respects at first, but now you're getting to know her even more in depth than before. Getting to know a love even better is intriguing, don't cha think? Deep scribe brotha Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to know one and to love one means u know one when u knew
    thankz watz for the visit
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as love grows it also becomes deep within in this union trust have been reached...i like the way this scribe made me feel inside the beauty of love most dont even have a clue of...and the impact wheeeew lovely scribe suga bear!!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true Angel knowing and feeling it blinds to a blissful love
    so to know one that u knew is beautiful when it mix & match
    thankz a million for the visit & support
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful It seems like yor longing to cover some ground in your persuit of her and this is most definetly a way to do it. Keep after what you desire you'll have it in due time.
     
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    This was beautiful $RICH$. I hope you get all that you desire.
    In the meantime just keep at it you'll have it in time.
     
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    thank u soulful2006 surely my beloveth will rise and say yes to me one day
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALl in time these things always happen all in time.
     
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    may her love whisper unto me yes as i await her whomever she be
    i have so much to give ....................again thankz as the secret continues