Black Poetry : Do I have to

[HODEE]

The dark horse I ride
Into the night
Step by step I come against the level
Thrust on the stage
Silent whispers of days gone by I wonder

Often trapped out side of my world
Struggling constantly with those I do not know

You make me

Slay another moment in time
Wasted to never be recovered and I blame myself
​

 

[angelicsage]

The dark horse I ride
Into the night
Step by step I come against the level
Thrust on the stage
Silent whispers of days gone by I wonder

Often trapped out side of my world
Struggling constantly with those I do not know

You make me

Slay another moment in time
Wasted to never be recovered and I blame myself
​

...this piece is dark and moving
very philisophical...
left me pondering

...and I love that line "slay another moment in time"
that was classic

Sage

 

[LovelyGoldenOne]

wow...this was a moving piece...

 

[$$RICH$$]

man this joint was touching and moved me
ya pen hit a goldmine

 

[Bluewater]

Hi Brother HODEE
my goodness
this flow is very deep
I can feel how you reach
within using your Pen
to release this awesome flow

Peace