Black Poetry : Do I Exist

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  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Am I in existence?
    Am I nominal
    Known only by name, skin color or sex?
    Where did I begin? not meaning
    Mother or father
    But really, begin

    An infant spoiled, being held to much
    A child crying from a disciplined touch?
    A teenager, uncertain of where to go
    A woman, with no answers and afraid to say no

    The alpha, the beginning, the before
    The omega, the ending, the nevermind no more

    Only leads me back to my nominal question

    Am I in Existence
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This poem, this poem!!!

    A feeling I feel often I must say!
    I love the feel of this one.
    It doesn't branch out very much
    Very consistent.
    The subject is very good
    You spoke on it well.

    This poem is very intense.
    I love this work
    Will definitely check out all you have to offer
    Very nice!

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes you do exit...
    And your exitance is very inportant to someone or something even if you're not aware of it...
    this was well written and recieved...keep it comming
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very intense likes how you laid this
    nice drop
    indeed
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now thats heavy, I likes this alot
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You went infinite steps further than that age old question about if a tree falls in the forest, and no one is there to hear it, does it make a sound? Posng the question that cannot be answered in our space and time, tight write.
     
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    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS VERY DEEP!!!!!
    I LIKE THIS ALOT.
    KEEEP IT COMING!!
     
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