Black Poetry : Do I Ever Cross yo Mind

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Lookin' back beyond tyme

    wonder do i ever rise in ya mind
    is it me u still see
    when it was you & me
    speaking talkin words care free

    Do i ever cross ya mind
    when u think of a love so divine
    one that pose such heart
    captivated on da secrecy sound
    when we begin da day we start

    Lonely night when u wanna be held
    feel warmth and caresses by such spell
    is it me that comes to mind
    that ya body wanna embrace
    when u undress down to ya lace

    Is it me or have someone taken my place
    is it not my face ya mirror image now trace
    do i still invade ya space
    tell me baby, i wanna know; talk to me! let it flo
    because i'm feelin you even mo .

    Do I Ever Cross yo Mind
    :qqb010:
     
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    beautifulblkw Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ever time i close my eyes
    it's u i see in my mind
    all the days we use to play
    all the ways we use to lay
    do u think as much as i do
    do u wonder about me to
    lonely days and lonely nights
    on my mind this can't be right
    the way u kiss me on the forehead
    in my mind i'm still with u
    the sexiness of u
    there is no one that take your place
    but i need someone to to feel this space
    if i had another chance on my mind u would be
    but in my arm i would keep
    u so close u couldn't breath
    u wanted to know
    what i feel
    on my mind thats for real
    so sweet as a glass of bitter wine **** ....... U are always on my mind

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Now I know i'm still within reach
    of a warm sweet tender peach
    yes u lay on my mind
    like summer gentle sunshine

    When in dem lonely nights
    it ya love my mind can not fight
    the way we always play
    and the beautiful words ya lips say

    Knowing my space is still there to trace
    and yet a void to that space
    make me think deeper wit grace
    that someday it will be me u see yes my face

    Because you river ova me like a cascading joy
    make me feel like a king and sometime a boy
    yes i think like you do with such feelings too
    sometime i don't know what to do
    don't you know i'm missing you boo!

    Alwayz crossin my mind
    from yo divine star smile and sparkling shine
    in my arm i forever hold
    keep you warm from da cold
    and compromise to never let you go
    see i really miss you mo by my face it all sho

    Do i really cross ya mind tell me honey one mo tyme!

    :hearts2::blowkiss::hearts2:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful write...

    When
    night falls and
    creeps along and I’m alone
    you cross my mind and I know I’ll be fine
    When
    the sun rise and
    hang radiant in the sky
    I think of you and all you do to make me smile
    images of you occupy spaces
    warming secret places
    cross
    my heart
    and hope to die
    you cross my mind
    all the time



    Sir. Richness this is such a lovely piece... I could not help myself.:)


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:heart:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Upon da cherry moon
    to know i'm there in da room
    of ya mental space
    where my love can spool & trace
    the warmth of ya face
    like chocolate drops of glist
    and on my mind to never miss
    is where i now lay my twist
    like a summer sweet bliss
    known i still have my place
    in ya heart and yo grace

    tell me again so i know
    i'm not sleep walking in tyme
    do i really cross ya mind
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think we've all been in this space, wondering if someone ever thinks of us lovingly at all any more, twas quite well posed poet. Enjoyed the flow backs from beautifulblkw and coco as well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah watz , it do make you wonder sometime ......I know i alwayz think of one's from the past..how they doing what's going on with them and little things like dat ..Thankz
     
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    loving this..
    I think at some point, we all wonder if
    our ex still thinks about that good ol' loving
    we got.:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep sweet baby face ya right.....Thankz a million honey
     
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    Your $Richness$,

    Wonderfully written.
    Everyone yearns for that embrace, that thought of
    crossing someone's mind.



    epiphany:heart:
     
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