Black Poetry : Division

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    United we stand
    Divided we fall...
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    naw, y’all
    This is the remix
    Just because....
    Division
    Yea, that's my name
    Derisive, devisive
    that's my claim to fame
    I divide and conquer
    And those in power
    don't have to concur
    I just do it
    Just because...
    I can
    And I will, in fact, I must.
    Put your faith in God,
    for I'm the last one you should trust
    but the first you usually turn to.
    Isn't it ironic, don't cha think?
    I take your otherwise caring nature
    and take it to the brink.
    Make you cuss fuss and fight,
    make it appear you started this war
    tuck you in, say good night
    And don't you know, I was even
    put in charge of turning out the light?
    Yea, I know,
    This just doesn't seem right.
    But the reality is, I have slight of hand.
    I mystify, I enchant, I have rendered you
    spellbound, so now I rule this land.
    So God help you, my pet
    I am as sly and crafty as they get.
    Say, have you met me yet?
    I am Division
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop here tyteeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good to have your support Rich, united we stand....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    united we stand ...I'm all for uniteing. this is very nice indeed. Wonderfully crafted. thanks for sharing this.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And thank you queentswana, for your kind words.
     
  6. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    WATS, That was awesome!
    Very powerful and intriguing
    message here!
    Loved it!
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm happy to know that you appreciated the message PurpleMoons, thank you so much.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz i would love to hear this read aloud. great drop
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw girl that was so deep. You got down with the get down on that. I was feeling it and hooked on every word. Much love watz for this one.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phenomenal, yea, if I ever read this one, it definitely would be something to hear, thank you sis.
    Thank you so much for the love on this Foxi, you drop some deep pieces yourself.
     
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