Black Poetry : Divinity(Its been awhile)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Oct 24, 2005.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She’s like God to them
    She’s righteous which is odd to them

    Her disciples ready to assemble
    Would wash her feet to get inside of her temple

    Men read her words like the bible
    Want her to be a wife without the title
    Their idol

    In the form of a female
    Worship her because of perception and her detail

    Get on their knees to bow to her
    Vow to her

    Men cling to her
    Often sing to her

    But she’s too high to touch and too invincible to see
    Not to mention…
    She belongs to me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i really enjoyed this drop !
     
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    feeling this flow flow on poet.
     
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    Wow, singing the praises of one that others may want, but you already have. And I didn't see that ending coming, that was on point. Awesome poet.
     
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    P - High praise for your well crafted scribe. You've captured that Have/Have Not aspect with delicious deviousness. HH
     
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    i appreciate the love. i know i havent posted a poem in months. i just wanted to put a lil sumthin sumthin on her to show im still alive. i see there are a lot of new poets. good poets at that. but thanks again much luv. ~poet
     
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    likewise poeticlyspeakin we miss ya too, u know that !
    do come visit share as often as u can much love at ya .
     
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    Its been a while for a few of us sister myself included :)

    I am glad to see your heart still spins its share of poetic floetry :)

    sweet :read: you are still such a romantic :read:
     
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    well u know... lol... i try... jk. naw but i appreciate the luv trinity. stay tru ~poet
     
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    Hi poeticlyspeaking :wave:
    It is so wonderful to read you again :)
    Oh this is a beautiful poem
    filled with the Love and deep desire
    that other wish to have for there own
    but she of chosen you
    I am just loving the vibes in your pen
    Very smooth
    Keep dripping that ink
    It is awesome


    Peace
     
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