Black Poetry : Divine release…

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 16, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as I begin to claim…
    let me bite…check mate
    this one is mine..profound...
    I been around seen a few things…
    But the love flows…
    Aint no shame…
    See in this game…
    Its U an I…..
    My nights are full of you…..
    We lay and dance…
    As we both get
    placed in a trance…
    Trace my being
    know I am whole……
    as I unfold wants been told…..
    Lovin affection of you is me…..
    Body twisitn…
    love yearnin….
    Dip and sway…
    as I work my thang…
    bliss of kiss…….ya know
    my love is sweet…come get ya treat
    round and round here we go….
    All over again…
    Tonight we
    Roam
    Moan
    Bling bling
    listen to da
    silent ring…
    I know I am your
    sweet thing….
    Bustin loose
    Erotic flame…..
    As we slow roll
    Come up in da rapture…..
    Divine release…

    a blkangel thang
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too sweet
    da treat is on
    ready to
    rock n' roll
    let it ring
    da bling sound
    of da mix
    hot off da press
    dip low flow mo !!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dip babe
    I ll flow fo sho
    Come……
    Just doing my thang….
    Dip babe…
    Feel my sway.
    Watch my walk…
    I stand tall….
    A perfect jewel
    Let me bite…check mate
    I got this…
    As we ride
    Feel my bittersweet…
    Hot off da press…
    Let it ring…..
    Lets swing…
    In and out
    Out and in…
    Rock and roll……
    Check mate….
    dont be scured baby knows......
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, mzblk, you're overheatin'.
    Sounds like U need some tension releasin',
    Stress relievin', passion freein',
    body teasin',good ol' fashion frisky fun.

    Nice piece.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a beautiful drop
    Peace
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey girl...how ya been??....
    i liked this piece alot..real suave n chic...
    you know,i might need me some of that
    blkangel thang.....4 real mami..LOL...
    you know you could show me whut thats all about...and i could show ya
    how i do it lurkstyle......as if ya didnt know!!!!

    ma,you know i'm playin....dont want you to take this tha wrong way.....but i
    was feelin this piece alot....work it!!!!!

    onelove..................
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a tight scribe poet...what a wonderful read today...

    one.
     
  8. deep_lyrikz

    deep_lyrikz Member MEMBER

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    ku toes (ha)

    For real ms lady im fellin the flow,,,,
    im lovin how your words shake my brain and make me glow.....
    do you talk to me directly?
    if i said that i loved your poetic side would you still respect me?
    you see lovin your flow is just like loving the dough..........
    I'd do anything to get you in show ...........
    can i find you at blockbusters on a shelf in a store.............
    everyday to my computer just to here you some more.........
    da mn i love when you rip through the bars.......
    I go to war with my self and take a look man here's the scars....
    I wish i mad you instead of music to ride to inside my cars.......
    i counldnt maitain so i felt i shout let my brain make way.......
    I fellin you for real and that's all can say!!!!!!


    Much love to ya **
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice rhythm...
    do your thang girl!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am glad ya like my piece......
    overheatin...naw
    tension releasin.... :smokin:
    stress unfold....and how
    passion heck thats me..... :wink:
    thanks fo da read lol :angel1:
     
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