Black Poetry : ~~~~~~ Divine Connection ~~~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 6, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now you go head ma'am! What I gathered from this was an overcoming to just be, loving and going, not to ask why but identify that a connection this great must lead to a history of greatness....
    love it
    love it
    love it!
    ***Nfinite Blessings***
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way you described the deep connection that souls can make, the images, so serene, yet powerfully connected, as though by God's hand. Sista, this was just awesome, such a beautiful write!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o my goodness this was so divine and butter smooth
    i just love ya vibe and the great way u pen words
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice very nice scribing
    enjoyed it.
    flow head on...laid well
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sista.....Sista.....Sista!!!!!!

    The depth of your mind astounds me!!!!!!

    Awesome as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome people always turn out...Awesome work. And I use "Awesome"...because I don't know anything higher...yet.
     
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    divine power indeed...
    souls of great depth and magnitude usually find a kindred spirt
    in this desolate world because of the vast numbers of surface dwellers...
    this is a true masterpiece that has embedded itself deep within my soul...
    sage for president ;)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    good flow

    I loved your flow...you have a way with words. I'm trying to get where you are gurl...but I love my style. I just have to work on my lyrics a bit.

    --- Poetic Pride
    smile :)
     
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    After reading this the 7th time
    I still find myself
    struck dumb

    There could be no re-ply from Ty
    worthy of the profound emotion
    poured into this… except acceptance of what is…

    Evidently
    your soul is
    where mine will be
    Eventually…

    And I have no words…just admiration and awe

    For you truly validate…

    Connection made :love:
     
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