Black Poetry : divided / division

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Out of deep rage
    striking wit bolts
    hitting at the heart
    yet not know of thee
    but still call upon the
    maze of da heart
    the whispers lay in
    the beckon of da soul
    and the voice sweeps in
    da winds yearning wit dis
    feverish burn in a out break
    deeper one slide under the
    stroking of my hands free
    and i held on this far but
    inside the journey i must
    continue single handed
    my loveth is of u
    and i embrace the cares
    after i reach the common
    grounds and place da true
    reasons i shall return
    allow me the time & space
    to define all moments and
    the blazing of thoughts
    i cry not in pain
    but in the joy that u shall be
    the sail is long and heavy
    i shall return . :eek:hmy:

    D.D.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storms sometimes
    come into one's life
    destroying foundations,
    causing devastation and strife
    If one's choice is to bear
    the weight alone, so be it.
    The beloved one will care
    from afar. This too will
    pass, as all storms do.
    Put your faith in God
    as the beloved puts
    her faith in you.


    This was very touching. Had to flow with it. Keep them coming.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a awesome poem, the pen is mightier than the sword this time.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i've sailed the sea
    throughout the bad
    weather caressed
    the raff of storms
    yet one not know
    da ventures
    but hold faults
    from the myth
    laid upon da soul
    let it not be a strain
    nor rip at heart but
    pass and keep up
    stream or down da
    beded river peace is
    in the valley near by
    as i head to the lone
    land to bring back
    the restored anew
    the return is soon !

    thanks sistah for the flow and support
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed thankz sistah sometime the pen control the tempo...
     
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    wonderful flow
    i really just sat back and enjoyed this
    i went on the trip with you
    in this poetic storm
    but what dont kill
    ya makes ya stronger.....
    within the storm you find strenght
    Angel
     
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    indeed angel indeed
    as it pass the growth
    of heart and stronger
    mind , body and soul
    moves down stream
    yes indeed
    Thankz for the flow and wisdom
     
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    ur words bring so much strength and wisdom ...thanks $$RICH$$
     
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    most welcome daroc
    i'm most humble & smiling
     
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    your welcome....love the flow
    walk to the light
    for he sees all
    and you go through
    to rise above all
     
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