Black Poetry : Divide Me Not

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIVIDE ME NOT

    I’m gonna miss the winter but I must depart
    My blood is drained from my body & heart
    Man I’m gonna miss the snow
    But where there is no light I can’t grow

    Divide my soul split my blood after I sleep
    When I get to the sunlight I cease the weep
    My eyes see darkness as I took a little peep
    My soul is torn in half so they fight to keep

    Lucifer wants me tonight
    And so does the angel of god’s light
    Who’s gonna win
    What gate shall I fall in

    Whats happening on Judgment day?
    I’m on my knees ready to pray
    My spirit isn’t up for any kind of division
    As good and evil have their collision
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u said it best right here ........keep spitting da word
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's gonna happen on judgement day, a question many have pondered. I really liked the way this was posed.
     
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    i like the way you have written this piece my brotha!
     
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    I appreciate the love
     
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    Great piece poet..thanks for sharing it.
     
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