Black Poetry : Diva Vs Predator

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got me breathing all hard
    Through this titanium alloyed mask
    And I’m finding myself locked on to your pheromones
    Indeed you are earth’s finest specimen
    Unlike the rest you’re thick boned
    Whose skin is too beautiful to be penetrated by my long spear
    Your eyes acids stare right through this suit and burn at my heart’s side.
    So how do I cut thee Diva?
    When I see no weakness, only the ever present attitude.
    Perhaps there is a weak point to your beauty
    Is it between your legs or better yet
    Should I cut at the pulsating cherry that
    lies between your chest?
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suppose all one has to do to get through to someone's heart, is to just bring themselves directly to it. You have got a potent style poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep sweet and heartful
    like how u took this piece
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I read this piece I can't help but think of Sanaa Lathun in the movie Alien vs. Predator. I like the piece keep it coming.
     
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