Quiet Poetry Lounge : Distractions of our Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Nov 21, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

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    At 1st it was all about the
    Attraction
    My Voice
    Your Vibe
    It felt like an everlasting tide of mathematical fractions
    The equation was
    studied
    and pondered
    We began to wonder and crave about solving this everlasting mathematical fraction of our natural attraction
    We just could not trust our natural instinct to Love our soul full interactions
    Then, one day we allowed logic and theory to trumph our natural attraction
    So of course it goes
    When we subtracted our souls out of our natural attraction for logical interaction
    Our true theories of Love and Commitment became
    The ultimate distraction


     
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    Nice read...enjoyed the rhyme scheme
     
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    Very nice Candeesweet!
     
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    Thank You butterfly.
     
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    Glad I could share this with you.
     
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