Black Poetry : Distant Shores...Yet Close

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Off on a distant shore
    Not to far from you
    I hold your love deep within me
    Wishing love will answer
    Deeper then it can get
    My love’s in a hush
    Never passing you by
    My heart beats in tears
    Waiting on love’s call
    Dreaming of that one day
    Dancing in the starz
    You and I

    I felt your pen many moons ago
    As my pen talks to you
    Caress the canvas
    Releasing true love
    As it ease the pain
    This is no crush
    My pen is kissing in foreverness
    It poses back to you
    Do you know?
    Can you feel?

    Wrap me in and
    Let me spoil you
    See,
    I been pampered in your pen
    Only in a hush of a whisper
    What you vow touches me
    Deep…

    I have roamed your flows a thousand times
    As our souls touched
    …but yet untouched
    All the riches in the world
    Can not compare to the love
    That flows in the air.

    My love came from afar
    You’re my muse
    Distant across the shores
    But yet so close

    This is too deep….
    To deep to write about
    To deep to pass
    As you pull me closer
    I felt your touch
    A thousand times
    I know nobody
    Can love me like you
    This is too deep
    For love is calling
    Dayum this is to deep
    To continue on this way
    As the moon covers the sky
    Once more…
    I hear your spirit calling mine
    As your pen takes to the canvas
    :hearts4: :kiss2: :hearts4:

    (c) 2005
    Poetry By Angel
     
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    These are the most beautiful words imaginable... felt completely, by surprise. :thanks:
     
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    The pen comes from the body of the "Heart" I enjoyed reading the joy two pens in sync the hearts,
    awesome piece, your creativity is a masterful art.
     
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    this was one deep sweep of heart
    and felt within as the pen kiss every
    line the note and message

    make a mind think ! tyte distant shores
     
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    Hi Sister Angel
    very nice poem
    flow on :)


    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone for the support and love

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    peace Mzblk,

    <shakes head>

    - just had to try and get out of that magnetic trance your poetry puts me in.. It's deep, too deep for my weak words to spoil the moment so I'll just read it again!!!!!!

    peace Angel................
     
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    most welcome sista this cascades deep close yet distant
    the shore is ahead to savior ...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh please you just trying to get a sista to blush....its working
    thank you for all the love and support...weak huh? did i mention i was spoil..LoL

    thank you
    my Poet Brother

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My love came from afar
    You’re my muse
    Distant across the shores
    But yet so close
    thank you for all the love you give a sista
    your support means alot....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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