Quiet Poetry Lounge : Distant Northern Star

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blackwizdom, Apr 25, 2003.

  1. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There’s something about your style, your presence,
    your elegance, and grace
    your serene femininity that brings a smile to my face....
    something about those eyes that got me hypnotized
    for there is an heir of mystique ....
    that kinda makes me weak....
    not sure if we met face to face if I could speak....
    but on da real if these words u can feel
    show a brotha some luv....
    because I'm shooting from da hip....
    but on da serious tip....
    this young black man is interested
    and he would love to be an instrument
    playing a tune nice and slow
    that’s only pace that I know how to flow...
    this brotha likes to take his time
    delicately imprinting each rhyme within your mind...
    so I wonder who you are.
    Distant Northern Star...
    shining so bright…
    just allow me to be a reflection of your light…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful and well posed
    her is a single red rose
     
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    BLACK GOT GAME

    You got the move creating shakes that make a poet great!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    Thats not fair, How you gonna make it seem like your talkin to me.
    Whose the mystery girl? Common tell me! Beautiful and sweet!
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haven't met her yet ..... glad u liked the poem
     
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