Black Poetry : distant lover...

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at
    night
    i go to bed
    (explicitly)
    to dream
    of him

    my
    chocolaty
    ebony treat
    savors me head to toe
    (particularly)
    below

    his
    hands
    d i v i d e thighs
    passageway to pulsating
    lips nestled in arouse
    scented
    bush

    with
    precise
    permeation
    he speaks fluently in an
    unforgettable tongue I’m positive has me
    sleep-talking sensuous
    gibberish


    at
    night
    i go to bed
    (explicitly)
    to dream
    of him


    in
    and
    out

    throughout
    the (entire) night
    heated caramel brown
    ingest him
    (repeatedly)

    gyrating
    hips

    BoDy-MoTiOnS

    u
    p

    and

    d
    o
    w
    n
    again
    and again
    sighs, moans and other
    wonderful pleasurable tones
    set to tempo


    she
    i
    we
    my
    kitty
    my
    (e n t i r e t y)
    indulge
    the fullness
    of him
    (strong)
    inside
    CoNtRaCtInG
    sweetly-moisten-walls
    until…
    warm nectar
    pour
    down
    ‘round
    his
    harden
    crown

    if…
    ever…

    i
    wished a
    dream come true
    it would be him making love
    to me outside my dream in reality
    my distant lover
    with me…

    (finally)



    MaddSistahlyAlways!
    Coco:heart:



     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    distant lover... Actually pretty close




    Cocobutterskyn,

    I know I can depend on you to school me, is it something in the air, something going around, what is it that reeks of love in the atmosphere? Everywhere I turn, there it is, hitting you in the face. And this piece of yours, its great, what a dream of the distant lover, very powerfully felt, thanks!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I bet he would enjoy dat too ....
    this distant lover hummmm
    who is this guy
    but from afar i say my my my !!!
     
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    LDR'S

    & 2 think, i've been tryin 2 avoid long distance relationships all this time. Coco, u never cease 2 surprise me. keep up the good work, please. ;)
     
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    cocobutterskyn,
    You set the smoke detectors off in this dream. This was hot lady. I love the way you describe craving and desire in a unique and erotic form. I'm loving your work.
     
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    coco:
    From one fan to another fan.
    This scribe is
    HABANERO HOTT!!!
    You brought the heat fa sho...



    Much Luv
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello All!

    :wave:

    Sir. Richness,
    He is only in my imagination:wink:

    Clyde,
    Perhaps there is something in the air and
    I inhaled it right before I fell asleep.:)

    LadyBelle, I don't do erotic often, but every now
    and then I get a rush and it comes. I'm pleased you enjoyed the flow:)

    Alkebulan, It has been awhile, so nice of you to come through.
    I appreciate your encouragement!:)


    4Ever, I your groupie am happy you approve!:)


    Thanks to all of you for showing a fellow poet support!
    Its appreciated, BIGTIME!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Okay cause u had me looking all ova the place !

    whewwwww ya mind took off and had a fire ball wit it again hot scribe !
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That could have been interesting. Perhaps I spoke too soon:)

    Yes it did and it was a fun and terrific trip!

    Thanks Sir. Richness... you are a gem!


    MaddSistahlyLoveAlways!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    Sure coco, and thanks!

     
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