Quiet Poetry Lounge : Distance love

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Outside my slumber
    beyond my fantasies
    my heart lone for you
    yet seem banished
    inside my mental
    my love reach in da distance
    holding together this creation
    touching u mentally
    was like holding fragile gold
    feelin like you are the other half
    to my whole through connection
    my spirit opens to grace you
    as these dreams lingers
    piercing at my heart from da depth
    of your very existance
    you become my distance lover.​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a metaphysical love, as one soul melts into the other. Such a warm vibe Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Indeed moreso the philosophical study of the ultimate love
    and an underlying nature of it , i can feel it in my soul ......
    Thank you sista Watz for the love u give baby
     
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    this distance love seems to eat away at my soul
    and this distance is beyond our control

    this is or nor the right time to get closer
    i so yearn to lean upon your shoulder

    the phonecalls, the email is tough
    i so yearn to feel your touch

    this every once in a while has me feening
    but the distance between us has me weening

    off the love making we experience
    thinking of cheating praying for repentence

    because its hard to be away from you
    i miss you boo
    why dont we do
    what we need to

    is close this Distance Love..............
    :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Closing the distance
    can be tough
    when we have no clue
    like crossing in dust
    but the feelings linger
    and the love get deeper
    thy heart weeps in hope
    for that gentle touch
    at every moon rise
    and sun fall
    i can hear da whispers
    the beckon of call
    we need to do what was laid
    get past the myth of spade
    and come close this day
    to stop the distance
    and continue da love ...........
     
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    no place like home when souls connect even from afar
    of a distance love one my heart cherish deeply ...........

    yet i question is it by fate or my fantasy to be !?
    surely it feels so real and good to me ................
     
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    Does matter the distance near or far
    The connection of the heart is what
    Keeps us from being apart
    You could be at one end of the globe
    And I at the other
    Never will I let the distance keep me
    From you my distance luver.



    Could not help it, it was begging for me to touch it.
    It's so luvley:)
     
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    fate or fantasy
    which one do you want
    do you want this to be a reality
    skip the fantasy
    all my life i wanted someone that can relate
    dont let fate
    keep us away from what we truly feel
    take the time to see if its real
    rich the ?uestion on my mind
    do you want to take up the time
    to see if this relationship can last
    do look past
    anything that makes your heart says no
    i just want to show
    you
    i wont give up nor be through
    until i hold you
    kiss you
    make love to you
    so longing to be with my
    Distance Love!!!!!​
     
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    TO MISS ONE IS TRIVIAL INDEED
    A LOVELY, LOVELY EXPERIENCE HAS GROWN FROM THIS DISTANCE SEED
    OH SUGA YOU NEED NOT PROVE TO ME
    I FEEL YOUR LOVE EVERY NIGHT NATURALLY
    JUST KNOWING THAT YOU SHARE A DEEP EMOTION
    WILL SET MY SOUL ROCKING IN TRUE DEVOTION
    SO I NEED NOT HEAR FROM YOU ALL THE TIME
    CUZ I LINGER ON YOUR WORDS WHICH IS A FEELING SO SUBLIME
    TO ME IN MY MIND YOU LIVE IN MY DREAMS
    AND YOU HAVE ME DANCING AND DRINKING YOUR TANTALIZING CREAMS


    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    4EVERLUV...........
    crossin da distance of love
    where our hearts cascade & hug
    from afar we may be yet closer
    for da world to see
    the depth of connection
    and the glist of compassion
    in one sensual fashion
    nothing can stop me from holding
    ya love in the distance...............

    Nevar .......................
    By fate is a gift of treasure
    yet da fantasy is da mold of pleasure
    reality can be one steamy twist
    and days of happiness in glist
    surely i can relate
    and yes u can be da food on my plate
    what u seek u can find
    inside my arms like sunshine
    feel my touch as i brisk ya face
    from afar distance lover something to trace

    Sweettee29..............................
    u are da maze to my tea
    and da love from distance sweet
    cascading deep inside of me
    good to know u can feel
    da emotion thats always real
    when we share our space & time
    drinking from ya cup sweet lady
    is my slumbering dream
    to taste and yam of ya cream.

    Thankz ladies as i watch from afar sending my love unconditionally
     
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