Black Poetry : DISS TO SOMEONE

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DISS TO SOMEONE


    Your rhymes fill with whack flaws while I attack with
    My jaws like sharks you have the type of art never swift
    Or flows right you goes nights without flavor raps stale
    Like four day old bread, got dumb crumbs and can’t prevail
    Scary like tales of the Crypt you fail in script try some fast
    Food and trash your attitude Burger king in hiring for the task
    Their desiring you homey put in an application your rap face
    Dilapidation, retire consider tomorrow, bitter sorrow a disgrace
    Bite and Grip meat with my teeth, you write the scripts
    of a thief like bad strips of beef rhymes has no taste flips
    microphones upside down corrupt pride of a clown, nouns
    don’t make sense, fake and dense this rapper not crowned
    like basketball I’m drastic yall stay corrupt in rap, do lay
    ups and crap like Kobe quick you a Moby Dick everyday
    just a fat whale with stats that failed quotes won’t stay afloat
    put a brown rope around this clown throat and try to choke
    Flavor from his whack mouth, attack his house with coke
    Bottles, this freak **** eat peanut butter and Jelly, why chow
    On a fake sandwich? It do great damage it take advantage
    When it stick to your jaw not sick and raw you can’t manage
    With a mouth full homey, my rhymes cut skin find a bandage
    Or bleed to death when you proceed to digest these ill blades
    Even Wesley snipe knows rhymes the dressy type, kill and persuade
    Vampires like you best duck as a scrub can’t suck my blood
    I’m legit and unique while you admit defeat just a dang dud
    You a wimp dude making an attempt to lube your game but
    Its dusty and rusty like old door locks couldn’t make an abrupt
    Hardcore drop if you threw it out a flying airplane and it struck
    Pavement lyric too soft to shatter you lost in this matter known
    As rap son, a stressed dummy, pressed for money you not strong
    Look I repay kindness while you see hay and blindness just a old
    Horse in a barn, voice scorned not even Paul Revere could roll
    In your whack saddles attack and battle the British, ugly raps scrolls
    Stuck son, use big words but wear the wigs of nerds have no class
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Deep flow wit a negative blow
    on a lyrical blaze dat ste da stage
    while words are cage in a maze
    like jackson hewett on state farm
    but still need to kick da charm !!

    Let it be bless when it confess
    da notion of a convotion dat's disrupt
    like a robber all corrupt in a webb of
    bad habits often be an silly rabbit
    trying to get a nut what a diss.....
     
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    yeah Rich thanks for the props for real
     
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    speechless speechless!:qqb022:
     
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