Black Poetry : DISS TO BURT BLAZE (ON B-BOYS)

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DISS TO BURT BLAZE

    I dispatch rhymes while BURT BLAZE hatch blind verses
    I take in skills while BURT BLAZE is a fake daffodil nurses
    Can’t diagnose this guy post no cure for pure whackness old
    Boy sure need practice this boy cry no identity hell I’m bold
    Try apply a remedy for his failed rhyme even cats in jail sometime
    Say he don’t got it, you devoted but not promoted a dumb ascinine
    Cat looking for attention cooking up a dismention of the twilight zone
    You write wrong and tonight home see the man in the mirror you alone
    And got a love jones for my rhyme but you scrub gone blind, boy you
    Out your mind, you a fake and silly won’t take responsibility for your true
    Actions, I grab lettrs and attach rhymes that’ll snatch minds then close
    The hatch on your spine, you sick and misled I’ll stick to your head and toes
    Like crazy glue, grab your girl hold her closely stole her heart mostly
    From you because you too dumb to make her happy my love is ghostly
    Like Scooby doo where are you, you devoted to rap but haven’t promoted
    Your crap to sell and make money you take crummy chances and I noted
    Your moves you don’t have a complex pace the next to fall on his face
    Trying to rap crying and crap take this tissue being great is the issue erase
    Your history and embrace the mystery of being last I’ll use dog mace
    On your eyes, you try for identity must first apply a remedy then chase
    A dream and don’t disgrace the theme of HIPHOP I’ll bury you here
    You’re very near drunk why carry beer in that trunk? must make this clear
    If you battle me you’l get rattle G so grab that canoe and a paddle and flee

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    BURT BLAZE this old white boy couldn't sit as judge if Johnny Cockran appoints him because if it don't fit you must acquit you can ask OJ Simpson this whiteboy couldn't administer justice if Olivia and Elliot from SVU on TV gave him permission along with Ice Tea this whiteboy couldn't give a blessed sacrament if he was a preacher this old white creature is lame and not righteous, even if Alyshah cook this old whiteboy a pizza he couldn't eat it this white ***** got cavites in HIPHOP
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    That's fire, son. You got verses 4 days. I be readin your work.

    break em up in syllables, break em in bars,
    Poor Righteous teacher reach for the stars
    you flow 16, i say 32, no hooks
    no rhyme books, no dirty looks,
    no chrome, off da dome, I came alone
    Best call home, now you shook.

    Now I cant battle, LOL...but you nice.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks had to do it but don't get no credit for it
     
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