Black Poetry : Diss No2 to Eclipse

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diss No2 to Eclipse

    Even as a boycott you couldn’t destroy the spot if I gave you a nine
    And picket signs with my lines still couldn’t spit a wicked rhyme
    A cricket sometimes you crawl on the wall bite the crop of Hip hop
    Behoove you to be nice you could lose your ice, smooth on a yacht
    With the dice, even if you support a court still couldn’t spit evidence
    In your residence it never rains clever in your brains that **** prevalent
    Get ambush all of a sudden push the buttons on your player hater
    Elevator won’t go up your flow suck air like a carburetor
    Feast and settle down even as a piece of metal clown
    You couldn’t come sharp your scum not on mark in the town
    Like Clark Kent I frown at your kryptonite lying on the ground
    Hardcore slob even as a doorknob couldn’t open the funk
    Smoking this punk like a joint so I’m doping this chump
    Roping a hunk of your whack verses like cattle to be saddle
    For battle even as a rattlesnake you couldn’t strike and straddle
    Straight ya atomic fang don’t spit Ebonics slang pass the gin
    And tonic while you sang whack songs dang this piss *** can’t win
    For losing and boozing on the Hennessey must be from Tennessee
    Hell you annoy me like a Bellboy G begging for tips, end this spree
    Even if you drink wine or liquor still can’t rhyme drunk or sicker

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the midst of your verbal astrology
    this Empress lyricist is ackowledging
    knighting you, as we enlightening fools
    who too clueless to even write down the rules
    hiding in corners like playing dodgeball in the first grade
    they fall before us like the patterns of a tree's shade
    existing inside of rhymes and nurturing hearts and minds
    although separate entities - wordz have coiled us into fate's binds
    mankind's hate finds no means to escape
    that's why for greater purposes we must create
    and relate on a clearer mental state....


    1luv
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish DIDN'T KNOW YOUKCOLULD MULTI-SYLLABLE RHYME LIKE THAT THANKS FOR RESPONDING IF YOU ADD A LITTLLE ATTITUDEYOU COULD BE RAPPING LIKE CRAZY RAP IS RHYME WITH ATTITUDE BUT STILL THAT WAS A DYNAMITE PIEC FOR REAL DOE
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word real Maddrapper - I spitz for real - cuttin an album that should be done by the year's end - HIP HOP 4EVER - singin, rhymin, and vybin

    1luv and all that
    2fish
     
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