Black Poetry : Dispossessed!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I watch you as you carefully trod on uneven sod.
    One in your belly and one by the hand.
    Where on this hellish hot day is your man.
    Your baby's daddy, your bedmate, intended
    your lover, your boo!
    Does he really give a **** about your children
    and you?
    Head bowed , ankles swollen, dragging a small
    bag of groceries and an unhappy child...
    You will have two mouths to feed in just a little
    while.
    Breast taut with the milk that will nourish.
    But, you smoked too much herb so your supply
    will not flourish.
    Thinking of bills unpaid,and even about getting
    laid. Wondering if he is tired of your now swollen
    body. You vow to get caller Id, to keep a eye on
    "He". When your check comes you give him a bill.
    Cause it's how you keep him coming back, cause
    you got his back and you always will.
    Is it enough?
    Even in this heat, you fill a chill.
    What will happen when you can't keep him in Nikes
    sacks and beer...That is should be the least of your
    fear. But , here you go walking,not feeling the least
    bit blessed.
    A poster child , for the "DISPOSSESSED"!
    BJS(c)2002
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy deep **** !
    all i do is lower my head and (((Shake it side 2 side)))
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellant piece!!!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you dear Scribes!

    I appreciate you taking the time to read. Dear Rich my number one supporter I can always count on you.
    Blessings on ya house both of you! Thanks!
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    Very strong words.
    Hits the soul.