Black Poetry : Dismissal

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  1. Foxy

    Foxy Member MEMBER

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    Fallen,
    For a man of sensitivity
    In tune with reality
    But I scoped that stereotypical male idiosyncrasy

    Time has passed
    Since I heard from his a@*
    He needs time to “miss” me
    Does he think I am straight up dizzy?

    Not knockin you,
    Have your cake, get what you can get
    Just making it plain to you
    That you ain’t worthy of this split

    You must be worthy,
    Show yourself approve,
    And until you do that,
    You can only imagine my groove

    After seven days of silence,
    Phone finally rings,
    His bass filled voice speaks a gentle hello

    Happy to hear his voice,
    Upset that he had the nerve to call
    I respond,
    Hello, and…
    Do I know you?
    And what type of **** are you on?

    I proceed with,
    I no longer acknowledge your being,
    Or the fact that you ever were
    You tried playing me for a phool
    But I exposed you, stripping you of your fur

    Yes, a rat you are
    But I caught you in your own trap
    Pick your chin up,
    You tired, trifling, immature a@*crack

    Need not call me,
    Forget that ever knew my name
    But do me this one favor….
    realize the qween that you had…
    and all you gave up,
    for the sake of runnin’ game
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurrrrrrrrrrrrl!!!

    you tough this one up from the floor up!!! Tight scribe!!!! Definitely....
     
  3. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    M'LADY.....
    .........Wouldst thou consider myself out of line~
    Were I to say that your manuscipt was tighter than a virgin's
    lovebox! Well, so be it then, I am out of line...because it is,
    and I've said it, so be it!* I LOVEDED IT!!!!!!!

    SAARONCROWELL

    *For the male perspective variation on the same theme.....
    check out "FEMININE WILES REVISITED" and please forgive the
    shameless self promotion!:kiss:
     
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