Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Feb 2, 2002.
well now sunshyne
every word heard on every line
now i understand .........wow!
the covetous views that i
once reserved 4 on-ly U
have melted away like morning
dew under the sun’s 1st rays
I love the way this poet "grew up" from the root. Your contemplations in this piece, have such a poetic flow.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
feel ya flo!
that self analysis thing is usually the
case, when there is a problem.
but the question is
who needs it?
I was feelin this so deep I got chillz!! Believe that...
"when there’s something wrong
with every 1… usual-ly it’s U"
SO ON POINT YOU JUST DON'T KNOW!
I am feelin you ...right there with you girl...
$$RICH-NE$$. thanks for always understandin'.
have i told you late-ly... how wonderful you are?!
MsJ. it's an honor to share my flowz wit you!!
thank you for takin' the time to read & reply!!
hi-wa. MY GA-Boi!! you know i be lovin' it when
you stop by... why you ain't leave me nuthin' poetic??
2Fish. hey long lost lil sisterrrr! i'm missin' you like
crazy chile! thanks for stoppin' in here to let me know
that you still loves me!!
I Hear Ya ... Loud and Clear ... checkin' myself
Yup, I see now ... but just for the record ... I won't settle,
But I will learn to appreciate more ...
okay...you got something you wanna get off your chest?
ooops my fault...you already have...
tight scribe poet and stop stabbing people...you knows they bleed right?
jes' playin' :d
member of da baby daddy's club
This is an awesome piece Poet. You have much to say here and you say it well.
This scribe is tight to death!! and oh, so true.
Our "pickiness" sometimes keeps us from our
blessings - and that is a shame. Keep putting it
down girlfriend!! ya
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