Black Poetry : ...disillUsioned.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Feb 2, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now sunshyne

    every word heard on every line
    now i understand .........wow!:eek:
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. GA

    the covetous views that i
    once reserved 4 on-ly U
    have melted away like morning
    dew under the sun’s 1st rays


    I love the way this poet "grew up" from the root. Your contemplations in this piece, have such a poetic flow.
    Thanks for sharing this with me.

    Much respect...Joyce
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    au-ite GA_

    feel ya flo!
    that self analysis thing is usually the
    case, when there is a problem.
    but the question is
    who needs it?



    great read!
    ya boi
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang sis....

    I was feelin this so deep I got chillz!! Believe that...
    "when there’s something wrong
    with every 1… usual-ly it’s U"
    SO ON POINT YOU JUST DON'T KNOW!
    I am feelin you ...right there with you girl...

    1luv
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks.


    $$RICH-NE$$. thanks for always understandin'.
    have i told you late-ly... how wonderful you are?! :heart:

    MsJ. it's an honor to share my flowz wit you!! :)
    thank you for takin' the time to read & reply!!

    hi-wa. MY GA-Boi!! you know i be lovin' it when
    you stop by... why you ain't leave me nuthin' poetic?? :D

    2Fish. hey long lost lil sisterrrr! i'm missin' you like
    crazy chile! :) thanks for stoppin' in here to let me know
    that you still loves me!! :heart:
     
  7. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HA

    I Hear Ya ... Loud and Clear ... checkin' myself

    Yup, I see now ... but just for the record ... I won't settle,
    But I will learn to appreciate more ...

    thank ya

    Alicia
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay...you got something you wanna get off your chest?

    ooops my fault...you already have...

    tight scribe poet and stop stabbing people...you knows they bleed right? :cry:

    jes' playin' :d

    member of da baby daddy's club :wink:
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,
    This is an awesome piece Poet. You have much to say here and you say it well.

    BE
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Big Sis!

    This scribe is tight to death!! and oh, so true.
    Our "pickiness" sometimes keeps us from our
    blessings - and that is a shame. Keep putting it
    down girlfriend!! :heart: ya
     
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