Black Poetry : Discumbobulated Art

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Sep 22, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I really need to be
    Torn down
    In order to become saved
    By you
    And then put back to gether again?

    Well one does need to see a literal way
    Of
    Becoming that infamous black wholes
    That swirl around
    It's own universal thinking
    Of how
    This all comes together but then disappears
    Right in the sight
    Of the beholder
    That puts us all together as beings of

    Been there Done that & Back again.
    Broke down by a back street hole.
     
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    Nice, Sister Poet Candeesweet.

    Love that you take chances and explore different possibilities with your poetry.

    Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
    (I love the sound of the word discombobulated)

    (smile)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The word made me feel the real words meaning too.
    I have to share for us to be together.