Black Poetry : DISCRIMINATING PROMISCUITY (verse 1 of 4)

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DISCRIMINATING PROMISCUITY

    She has that grace, that finesse … that style
    She woo’s me with her feminine wiles
    I’m mesmerized by her sensual, feminine elegance
    Which distracts and diverts my attention from things of relevance
    I’m smitten by her beauty because she is sugar to the eye
    I’m hinting at her booty, I’m not gonna’ even lie
    I’m taken by her curves that has my sights transfixed
    That causes my inner man to speak profanely because lust and rationale are intermixed
    She’s visually tasty and I get an eyeful; deliciously
    When we have sex, I say her name religiously
    A seductress; a mistress of wills that she affects with proficiency
    Seducing me at every turn effectively and efficiently
    Aw Man!! She’s a fine so and so, she’s gorgeous and she knows it
    God **** she’s sexy!! No matter how you say it, toss it or throw it
    I’m overcome with her sensuality … so sexy and meticulous
    I’m blessed to be her chosen one – the result of her being selectively promiscuous

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2007

    I'm sending the complete poem to the Subscibers of The K-JiO Project. To get the other three verses, just send a message to [email protected] and put the word 'Subscribe' in the subject line, and I'll get my latest piece(s) out to you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man bruh u laid out some heavy scribing right here can't wait to feel da pen on the rest
     
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    When you're selective your apt to get the cream of the crop. The rhyme scheme, the meter, your playful word play...this scribe was tight.
     
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    Rich & Watzinaname, thanx for the read. I bow to your accolades
     
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    nice one poet.
     
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