Black Poetry : discretion

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  1. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the dark hallway
    of the club
    I positioned myself
    near the fountain
    hoping to 'happen'
    upon your exit
    behind door no. 1

    smiling to myself
    I rehearsed my lines
    hoping to sound
    casual, because
    I stammer in my
    thoughs when it
    comes to you...

    a few times, the door
    swung open, and
    to my relief, it wasn't
    you....

    something made me
    wonder if you knew

    I began to pace
    the dim space of
    that corridor...
    looking useless;
    trying to perpetrate
    importance when
    folks would look my way...

    and then I heard the
    door

    without even looking
    I felt you moving
    behind me...
    coming toward me

    I timed myself and
    turned around
    to see you, feel you
    inches away

    your heat penetrated my
    clothes and I had to
    steady myself against
    the wall

    others were passing us
    by now and the crowd was
    building, before the show

    you moved forward,
    and so did I...we 'danced'
    for a moment, and then
    we laughed...

    'excuse me, may I get by?'
    you asked, amused/annoyed...

    'excuse me, may I have this dance?'
    I asked, amused and hopeful...

    My arms went into automatic
    and instantly I pulled you into
    me...

    your body, beneath your thin
    dress....revealed each curve
    imprinting all your beauty against
    me

    before your mouth could register
    what was racing through your mind
    I released you....with regret

    but I want to thank you
    for the dance


    r
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well scribed poet! no doubt. But why'd ya let her go,did you get a name (I'm tripping). On the real this piece was :hot:

    one love,blak
     
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    Wow Raheem !!!! Great Work !!!!

    I was aaaaaall into every line of this ....
    wow ... great !!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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