Black Poetry : Disappearance of Innocence

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  1. Blue

    Blue Active Member MEMBER

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    Disappearance of Innocence: My Apology to the Princess

    After a year of romantic failure
    Your soul began to haunt me
    My dreams began to taunt me
    Plaguing me with thoughts of your love

    I remember the nights we used to spend together
    The first night that started out as playful, soon became intense
    Our beautiful friendship began to grow with our very first kiss
    A kiss that meant the world to me
    Our love could no longer resist

    In unison, we surrendered ourselves to the moment
    Your lips tasted so sweet
    Our tongues created a mind of its own, as they began to dance to our newfound passion
    Within seconds, temperature in the room began to rise

    Princess…
    I’m sorry for giving you such an experience
    The disappearance of innocence

    We were making the perfect love story
    Three years of friendship, before we evolved
    I grew to love you so much
    You always greeted me with that beautiful smile
    From the first day I placed eyes on you
    I knew you were someone special
    At the time, I didn’t have a clue
    I just knew something drew me to you

    Princess, I’m sorry
    I’m sorry I failed you when you needed me most
    I’m sorry that I backed away
    I should’ve never kissed you…
    Touched you…
    Caressed you…
    Wrapped my arms around you…
    Trying to balance the tight rope of friendship and romance
    I should’ve known better
    I know it’s too late for second chances
    But, I’m NEVER gonna make that same mistake again

    Princess…
    I’m sorry for giving you such an experience
    The disappearance of innocence

    My promise was to never be the one to hurt you
    My commitment was to keep you happy
    I messed up…there’s no poetic way to say it
    I was too immature to handle the responsibilities of emotions…
    I failed you

    Princess…
    I’m sorry for giving you such an experience
    The disappearance of innocence
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ATONEMENT

    TruBlue, touching too!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so many emotions,
    which one do you choose.
    to let that person go,
    is what you must do.
    take away the hand,
    that gave here love.
    let it all go,
    give her a shove.
    it will hurt you now,
    and she'll understand it later.
    you were the one she loved,
    and that's why you're not the player.........(LOVE IT) (ADD ME)
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A hard topic to tackle poetically.
    Well done, Poet.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovingly deep...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweetly posed and point made .....very nice work
     
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    How absolutely poignant!
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmm.......

    i remember the first time i kissed my best friend....

    *sigh* why is it the ones we really try not to mess up, we mees up the most?

    beautifully rendered piece.....

    **lost in thoughts of yesterday**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
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