Black Poetry : Dis' Poem Wrote Itself

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dis' poem wrote itself
    It was dealt once it was felt
    Touched the ground
    Running fast...
    Made to last
    The die's been cast

    Two wrongs don't
    Make a right
    We start a fight
    Out of spite
    To delight
    In our might
    It's rather trite
    And costing lives

    Dis' poem is something else
    Enjoy its stealth
    It wrote itself...
    To earn respect
    It aims to teach
    In case the mental
    Is ill at ease

    No poem delights in itself
    It guides the pen
    For you to win
    The hearts of men
    Who know God's plan
    That helping hand ~

    Means to an end...



    Darryl Abdu Omari :heart:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome when the pen work on it's own
    see what it bring a masterpiece !!!! flow on bruh
    love this drop that written it self ...................
     
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    :welldone: Post poet ya doing ya thing and this family is graced to have u here. :hearthis:
     
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    I'm loving this piece. Many poems do write themselves. Yes they do. Nothing stunts that. :great: :great: :great:
     
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    well it wrote it self but the poet behind the pen is awesome
    enjoyed this keep on flowing i be reading....Angel
     
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    Thank's for all of the love written upon this heart!
     
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    You're something else 1poetsought. Flow so strong, the mental couldn't hold it, and the pen just started writing. Now that's poetic strength. Flow on with ya bad self.
     
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