Black Poetry : DIS LUV IS YOURS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mental 2 mental
    from my soul
    to yours
    with my love
    i give u
    with my heart
    i place upon u
    with my hope
    i give u new life
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS

    let the essence of heart
    be felt in the rapture of
    my mist as it embrace
    u to a warm feeling as
    i feed u a love so sweet
    let da divine explosion
    set off da sonic boom !
    of our togetherness
    as we fleet into a bliss
    of happiness where love
    rest by reasons and grace
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS

    allow the emotions to open
    and let da inner beings seep
    out to be caressed by the
    handz of foreverness and know
    my love is real
    feel da depth of souls clashing
    as we relax wine & dine under
    the burnning cherry moon as
    da starz twinlke as the flames
    of the candles flicker off ya body
    as shadow dance in romance of
    me as i leave da golden key to da
    domain of i and dewell in hope
    let da vision in ya mind come true
    and see da compassion of my heart
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS LADY !

    cometh within my beloveth
    and forth knoweth of me
    as i enrich ya wit da delightful
    love a Queen lone to feel
    and touch u wit the rapture of
    love a woman dream of nightly
    take ya flyte to my secret place
    with the key open da door to da
    ball room of romance shall we
    Dance Lady now
    as i set off the maze of bliss
    and kiss the taste of honeysuckles
    from ya lips as i dip u into deep
    mesmerizing feeling of a love
    never felt and hold u so gentle
    place u in my arms of tenderness
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS Lady !!

    as i now set da mood right
    u and i tonight
    hot oil bubble bath
    ready to rub u down
    fulfill u when i roam
    sweet soft moan to hear
    let me feel u dear as we
    set off a emotional massive love
    release all the notions of what if
    and lay deep in what is
    come as u are as i feed u
    a romance the way a woman
    wants to feel and sing da song
    in ya ear as we dine tonight
    let da starz dance in glo to let
    da world know of this true love
    i pose and my rare delighted rose
    let the moon smile in gleam
    as it become u and me a we
    together finding self in the moment
    let the elements of us rush outward
    as caressed from da orbs of souls
    as we touch galaxy and cross ova
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS LADY !!!

    come into da arms of loyality
    and feel my magical royality
    as i rub u, caress u , trace
    all means of rapture with ya
    beauty ............................
    so my beloveth
    bring da cold heart so i feed warmth
    bring all da pain so i can cure
    bring what's broken so forth i mend
    bring da doubts whereas i so place trust
    bring da tears so i may dry wit joyment
    replace them and cast all ya fears away
    hold ya rockin hips and feel da sway
    come as u are as i place da new cloth
    before thy feet of ya choice of silken
    garments tonight relax in and ware
    da red blazin heart
    da purple passion
    da black lace of beauty
    da pink candy of fluffy fur
    da clear sheer thongs
    as i hypnotize all notions
    into a bliss of lovin between two
    me and u when u ready lady
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS

    will u come openly
    will u feel da bliss
    will u allow my comfort
    will u give a love hope
    will u see as i see in u
    will u allow ya soul to release
    will u know forth my heart
    will u
    will u
    come with
    will u
    will u
    love to be loved
    will u
    mentally allow da
    passion to open
    will u
    will u
    LADY
    DIS LOVE IS YOURS
    :hot: :luv: :flirt: :luv: :hot:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is writters block...but i try....

    Mental 2 mental
    Simple pleasure of desires
    Turning into sweat
    Just release….
    Da fire burns
    Reaching to put it out
    But da flame begins
    To blaze….as we kiss
    It begins to rain
    And da steam rise…..
    As we start to play
    In da open skies
    -------------------------------------THIS LOVE ......

    From my soul to yours….
    I take ur heart
    And hold it
    With care…….
    As you place thy golden key
    The rapture burns
    And love yearns….
    Feed me a sweet love
    Explosion of sonic boom
    As happiness roams the room…
    TAKE THIS LOVE…

    In the open skies
    Love rest by reason
    I will love you in all seasons….
    Grace before me I take
    As we kiss and
    it begins to rain…
    from the doves cry…
    TAKE THIS LOVE…

    Under the cherry moon
    We so happen to be…
    as emotions ride
    romance
    shadows begins to dance
    as I enter into your
    domain of hope
    compassion I come true…

    unto thee I walk forth
    thru the orbs of time
    Within thee my love
    Covers you as I am thy rib
    with no regrets
    upon thee I lay
    My shield of heart
    our hopes
    and dreams as
    thy soul release unto thee
    dance in amazement
    as I fold in thee arms of
    tenderness
    loyalty
    royalty
    and tranquility
    TAKE THIS LOVE…

    ....SORRY
    HOPE YA DIDNT MIND :D
     
  3. seduction29

    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA

    RICH..IS IT LIKE THAT WHERE U CUM FROM...ANGEL U FINISHED IT WITH CLASS..WRITERS BLOCK..LOL...WHAT WOULD U HAVE WRITTEN IF U DIDN'T HAVE THE BLOCK...CAN'T IMAGINE THAT WAS NICE..BOTH OF YOU..29
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is what I'm talkin' 'bout, one nice piece complemented by a nice reply/piece.

    $$ & mzblk, y'all compose pieces like Marvin Gaye & Tammy Terrell, ain't no mountain high enuf, ain't no valley low, ain't no river wide enuf 2 keep y'alls minds from blending beautifully.

    I really dig when y'all get loose, don't stop.
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    post and reply went hand in hand
    to make such a lovely flow...
    :)
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm...mmm...mmm

    I love it when a man calls me "Lady"...
    and comes correct with the offering of his love
    oh yeah...I was totally caught up in the "Rapture"
    of the candles, the hot oil bubble bath...
    and the most vital component...

    "Rich's Poetic Touch"

    Loving it!
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u all da warmth of da upper room love flowin low
    may it embrace u and bring u forth the coming of my heart
    as i lay down my main frame to be tested ..peace
    angel
    seduction29
    positiveMindset
    triniti
    angelicsage

    let ya visional mind wrap into the bliss
    and feel the heat of true lovin pose
    correctly and strongly unto u within da soul
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sooo sooo soooo...I can't even think of the words. What a way for a man to lay down his LOVE! Much love. And I loved the reply. You two are still collaborating like WHAT! Much much love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u trueLove
    it how it should be to every Queen cross da global world
    one so sweet and dear to heart so forth i lay down my
    main frame and allow her to walk freely openly and come
    within da grasp of my love ......peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angel...............
    if this love speaks
    can u feel da sweet
    as it sweep u off ya
    feet and daze u in ya
    sleep can i make it
    right and take ya soul
    up in flyte

    DIS LOVE IS REAL

    can u lay out the bliss
    and feel my gentleness
    as we embrace to a mix
    and da depth of tenderness
    as i trace da essence
    and sho u love

    DIS LOVE IS STRONG

    in my arms hold u tight
    make ya body feel just right
    feed u the song i sing
    wit a rapture dis i bring
    can u savior it within
    and know da lovin King

    DIS LOVE DON"T HURT

    i caress & mend
    fix what broken
    within deep to da
    heart
    and comfort da
    what was to a what is
    set ya soul on fire
    take u into a deep desire
    and fulfill ya estacy
    be da brown bomber
    hit wit explosion
    rock ya body wit
    every motion to send u
    in deep chills but a lovin thrill
    can u take da bliss of da
    magical Royal $$RICHNE$$
    DIS LOVE IS A shhhhhhh!!!!
     
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