Quiet Poetry Lounge : dis aint no queit piece......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 9, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin all that you pose…
    let me take you there..
    and set your mind free…
    don’t worry…I am here….
    smooth all up in your groove…
    heart so whole…
    set it free let it flow…
    I feel what you pose…
    Now take a hold of it…
    Just hold it tight….
    This the love you want….
    I at got no shame in bringin it…
    Down on your knees….
    A love so pure a love so sweet
    I have no shame in you so let me sing…
    You’re the one I love…..
    From above
    You came unto me…..
    Lalalalalalalala…
    Lights shinin bright…
    Its closer in my heart…
    Look up in the skies…..
    This is alright with me…
    So now take it
    And wrap…
    Hold it tight….
    This is our flight….--->
    But let me break it down--
    My love is true….
    I know what ya like…
    So hold on tight….
    All I got is love for you….
    Now look me in my eyez…
    Look in my soul….this is for real…
    Don’t go and hide…
    Come up out that corner…
    Tired of the game…
    Time ta tame…
    What we have…
    Lets build…
    Work it from the ground up….
    And bloom
    As only we know how….

    this is my thang.....now its our thang....
    so work it

    :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    work it to perfection
    from da heart affection
    work it
    groom it
    as it bloom
    felt u all in da room
    tyte flow
    well felt
    too sweet work it !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes...
    just hope he understands
    what i just posed...
     
  4. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'M FEELIN' THIS...

    he would be foolish not to accept that proposal
    Do that thang msblkangel.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks he is way from foolish...
    i live in his heart as he lives in mine...
    glad you like...JAD68
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful...do your thang girl!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol true love..thanks for the read..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one still hit home i love how it was done
    and the deep affects it pose ....uppin it again
    for the world to see
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sweet, original...and spoken from the heart
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Work that thing... as only you can!
     
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