Quiet Poetry Lounge : DIRTY SHAME LOVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da No Gooder .....

    Fallin in love wit a no gooder
    one 's love that woulda shoulda
    a love dats misused
    da kind dat's physically abused
    where it's mentally confused
    that love of dirty deed
    make ya soul boil & bleed

    Being in love is beautiful as ever
    but a no gooder is like stormy weather
    alwayz raining down on you
    showing up like da shadow or glue
    compromising and never do
    lies and lies between da truth
    false love is what they do

    Tell me have this happen to you
    maybe once or a mini two
    that leaves ya twisted & confuse
    from da dirty shame and no clue
    love is deeper yet free
    unreal like expression of you
    emotions running high

    Hot love is never good
    450 degrees of boiling rules
    trying to master da yin n' yan
    storming down on ya brain
    see love don't truely claim
    just come unwanted to stain

    Wait love is sweet and kind
    love have many wild lines
    a treasury of sayin so divine
    cross feelings dat leave u cryin
    dirty shame love has no time
    taste like sensual wine

    O'my my what a dirty shame
    no need to look or blame
    just state ya claim
    remember to listen and tame
    and alwayz aware of love's
    N~O - G~O~O~D~E~R

    :eek:oops: ​
     
  2. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo....Big Bruh....Can we post this on a BillBoard at home in Tha Chi?...Really tho, this is some Hype isht. "woulda shoulda"...Yeah Mon..Mi know a hole heap a no-gooder dem...

    Big up...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tell me about it , they all around us in both gender male as well female
    the love of a no gooder is a road to nowhere no matter how hard u try..

    think i'll put it up on the stevenson exp or downtown ....lol
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love in and of itself is beautiful, but some people's version of love is butt ugly. Yes, I've known of a few.


    Dirty shame love
    just thinks of self
    Puts true togetherness
    on a cobweb shelf
    Tells stories that sound
    like truthful tales
    But when you check
    them out, only lies prevail
    You try to show your love
    and fight the good fight
    But no matter what you do
    the no gooder just won't do right
    Feelings aren't anything to be
    played with, and love isn't a game
    Playas abound and get turned out
    when the love is a dirty shame
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes u can spot'em a mile long
    from the sad tale of there song
    tellin u this and that
    lying beyond da truth to splat
    u try hard to understand
    but a no-gooder has no plain
    false love for only self pleasure
    forgotten about what to measure
    crossin feelings by betrayal
    leaves a pain like a sinful spell
    no-gooders truely don't care
    beware beware of the tale
    but love is beautiful enter if u dare
    trhey all around they everywhere.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My last piece made me wanna touch this No-Gooder !
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great flow on the No Gooders $$RICH$$

    Advertising on a site
    Waiting for u to reply
    So they can ruin anothers life

    They must practice the deception night and day
    In amirror practicing what to say
    how to do and how to stand
    Dirty No Goodders do come female and man.
    Glad I could add what I see
    And warn as many who may read this plea
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You and your ideas! So good! UGH! lol Loved this poem and its counterpart
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :SuN026:
    Save yourself from
    No Gooders
    Take you to the Bottom
    The 6-footers

    Stay Safe
    Be ware of the
    No Gooders
    the Smile then Shooters

    No Gooders
    the Loot hooters
    Take Care From
    Secure yourself

    The Horn tooters
    Be conscious
    Take watch from
    No gooders


    You were Rappin in this one $$RICH$$ LOL!!
    Flow on
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea been there, done......................................

    i know the feeling

    but when you feel love

    it's hard to see sometimes lol

    peace CHI CITY
     
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