Black Poetry : Dirty Clothes

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dirty Clothes


    Your drop off your dirty laundry
    wrinkled and soiled so I can sort
    through where the colors are
    you just dispose of them because
    you said that it was no use to you
    any more so being the loving kind
    considerate person I am I picked
    him up out the trash washed and
    cleaned the gutter off him where
    you left it stained. Stains of your
    self-righteousness and your in
    consideration off his feeling you
    did not cater to his needs you
    wore him like a mink coat at first, all
    clingy and warm at first then as
    he seem to loose his luster, or maybe
    he did not shine enough for you to
    be seen you tossed him to the side
    having a temper tantrum for
    something new, once you got it he
    became your old rags, like they say, one
    man’s junk is another man’s treasure.
    Well honey let me tell you “you’re old
    trash, “dirty clothes” I have now washed
    starched and ironed them and the more
    I care for them the better they look so
    now your rags are my million dollar mink,
    the most beautiful thing I ever saw. You see
    sometimes if you just take the time to listen
    to care, and even share a small piece of
    yourself you will be surprised at the jewels
    you find in a dirty piece of clothes.

    Aqueenp***ing
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    babe u said it all here !!!!
    i sho nuff loved dis
     
  3. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    $$Rich$$

    I am so glad you like it... thanks so much

    Blessings
    Queen
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this fa sho,
    the truth is mos def spoken here.
    I guess we all need to head to
    the Laundromat 1 time in life.
    Holla Back!!!
     
  5. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hye Queen its so good to see you around, ive missed your words, I LOVE THIS piece, every time I read it Im like YEAH!!

    nice to read your words again, missed u

    amberly
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Both !!!!

    PWP,
    Thank you again I truly appreciate your kindness...

    Queen
    :wave:


    Amberly,
    Hi Sis, thank you so much so glad to hear from you again
    and I missed you to (smile) glad to be back everyone here is so wonderful I had been gone awhile, So now that I have finished school Hope to be able to post more..... Thank you so much

    Hugs
    Queen:thanks:
     
  7. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peace queen,

    that was a nice flow... definitely food for thought... makes ya wanna look all thru the dirty clothes for some jewels... love the message... keep flowing

    peace
     
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