Black Poetry : Dinner and a Movie?

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  1. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Months and months have gone by ,when I wanted to approach you.
    But when I got my chance I didn’t know what to do, or say to you.
    My dreams of you, are pleasant even though I’m tossin and turnin,
    Sweatin beads down my back
    like the bed is burnin,
    And I’m concerned that this is not normal behavior.
    Treatin you like you my savior
    or my destiny or my eternal partner full of bliss,
    Like I’m gonna turn into prince charming
    with just one kiss.
    Hit or miss
    I’m steppin up to the plate two outs, 9th inning with the runners in scorin position
    Time to make the right decision.
    Dinner and a Movie?
    Seems like the right vibe for me. Can you feel what I’m saying?
    Just dinner and a movie.
    No overnight staying,
    I’ll take it slow, cause I see the forest beyond the trees,
    and a You and Me picture sitting on a blanket under that big oak tree
    I imagine that when the time comes I’ll be
    Barely eating cause I’ll be preoccupied by your eyes,
    by your perfectly shaped figure that calls me
    and I can’t help but listen,
    the gloss on your lips glisten, I won’t tell you what I’m wishin for,
    but it is more than I imagined or even hoped for
    I remember my knees shakin when you came to the door,
    and now my mind is perplexed,
    as your calf muscles flex
    when you step that sexy step
    I’m stuck in a daze as the dimly lit lights bounce off your silky brown skin,
    fascinated by your giggle,
    when a piece of food lands on your chin.…
    When you say “ I need to to go freshen up, I run over to help you with your chair
    tryin hard not to stare
    But that long fitting dress with the split on the side.
    Is Touching my soul, and teasin me as I ride
    the wave of lustful desire
    Girl you set my soul on fire,
    The possibility, alone has me high
    From a glance of the small exposed portion
    of your succulent thigh…..
    I take a drink to change my thought,
    lustful fantasies I have fought,
    And I’m not tryin to get caught
    driftin down the wrong street
    So my desires for you........ I keep discreet
    But I’m beginning to think that this can’t be fair
    You shine brighter than the brightest sun’s glare.
    I hope this dinner and movie, lasts long,
    so our date can go on and on.
    and I wonder is it wrong,
    to hope that this date won’t end to fast
    Is it wrong that I want it to last
    I hope this is a good beginning, and not a graceful ending
    Cause for months and months, my heart would need mending.
    I’ll admit that . I been wanting to ask…
    But I knew it would be to fast but I’ll let it slip anyway,
    Baby after this dinner and a movie,
    How about we catch some breakfast…early.the next day.
    Copyright © 2001 T.L. Stevens
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    partna

    maan do i ever feel you on this...
    i laughed a little at certain lines that i could relate too.
    it's like we saw the same split in that dress, the same thigh or sumn'
    a dinner and a 2 hour movie, then breakfast, then lunch??
    gotta say i feel ya.

    nfinite poet,
    jh.
     
  3. soulful

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    dinner is nice....

    Yo dog, just wanted to say this was on point, I went out on a dinner and movie scene this weekend, and I just wanna know if you were a fly on the wall cause it sure sounds like how I was feeling up in there!

    Keep it flowing on the real!
     
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    Tbone......

    What a pleasant rendition of admiring someone from afar, then having the opportunity to be just a little closer.....very nice vision of love or lust in one's eyes.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    T man

    i feel ya on dis here ...
     
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    now this is tyght!

    I enjoyed watching your dreams unfold....beginning romance is the sweetest thing to behold...

    thank you :)

    a
     
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