Black Poetry : diggin' she (an inspired by elayne. version)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she be like
    aloe on a scorched soul
    soothing sage in my nose
    i inhale and envision
    her latte' skin/ she be
    like all on the tip of
    my tongue my "acid"
    and i see life in
    psychedelic shades
    riding her mental wave until
    i reach the shore...tired/
    she be like warm hands on
    minnesota days and the
    voice that commits
    "black-on-black love"
    revolutionarily speaking
    she be like the afro that
    rides my vibe / the footsteps that
    echo in the halls of my mind
    she be the tapping, boom-bapping,
    hand slapping goddess of love...
    she be like giving a brother
    high fives cause his blakness
    is thorough...reaffirming my being...
    i be diggin' she like some neo-soul
    flow/ some retro blak velvet painting
    glow/ she be underdiggin what i'm
    overstating / she be the tilt in my axis
    when i'm rotating/ cause 360 degrees i
    revolve /she be her own new religion
    ...so i practice "she"logies...and recite
    cow-ries/she is the real virgin/all
    innocence begins with her...love is her child
    / i be diggin' she two hundred seventy plus
    daze and counting still...

    (c)2003 blakverb
     
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    awesomw scribe blak man...keep cranking these out!!!
     
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    garrison.


    ...****! i wish i coulda hit this joynt first! :D

    but! nonetheless... i am diggin' this... deep!!
    you are just... just... too **** much!! & the
    rest... i'll tell you myself!! :)

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a perfect reply to the beauty of Elaynes' words...awesome!!

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, how sweet it is!

    This was Northern lights phenomenal! I loved this so much!
    I got to go find Elaynes poem...where it be ya'll?

    Yo house is Blessed!

    Blessings continue...:heart:
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam. elayne's piece was so heavy that i had to write something. her muse was wonderful.

    blak
     
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    great
     
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    ill wordplay

    dope

    one luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oh' my Verb u just took it up higher
    man dis was awesome
    da ladies don't have a chance
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ya'll for the read
     
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