Quiet Poetry Lounge : Different Levels…

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jul 9, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All relationships have ages and stages and you posed this so well here. And the last two lines:
    "Or will these different levels…
    Part One…into Two"
    The word play here, so impressive, so crafty! Interesting questions raised, causes one to ponder and reflect.
     
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    This reminds me of a relationship I was once in......I'm with you, sis, and I wish you peace and strength as you move forward into your further growth. Much love to you. :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this well felt u took me back 10 years when i had to make a move to a new wave
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there you go again...
    you know i've taken to standin' up while readin' your poetry simply because i think it deserves that much

    RESPECT :bowdown:
     
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    Sage,

    I'm with Watz,...the last line of this was very creative. Things go this way sometimes. Thanks for the great capture... :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  7. angelicsage

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    True indeed...relationships do have stages unfortunately...the stages
    sometimes bring about "division"....and I'm terrible at math...in this case
    I really hate it...lol

    Much luv Sis...
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you...I absorb all the positive energy you're sending...I need it..lol

    Much luv to you!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...thanks for relating...it's sometimes difficult at first...but quite often
    it's for the best...Change is sometimes a good thing!
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    7thPoet...what am I gonna do with you...

    I have never received such an honorable reply...

    I had someone say...that they always had to read it aloud

    but never standing....WOW...consider me completely humbled...

    and as you told me...smh..."Flatter will get you everywhere", lol...

    Much luv to you Poet!
     
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