Black Poetry : Difference of Opinion

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Difference of Opinion

    In a perfect world we'd be addends, not putting on a show
    Contributing to the sum of the things that we know
    Adding this that and the other, building off of one another's vibe
    Careful to stay away from criticism and the occasional diatribe
    But of late I've been the minuend of things present and plain
    You've been the subtrahend with something to prove, with private pain
    Subtracting from each others personal views, each acting like a common minion
    And ultimately what we contribute to is a difference of opinion

    Written by: K. Charles
    (c) 2011
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm going to take this as just another "flow" of yours...be it a different kinda flow...not having your unique flava. if there's something more, i hope open wounds and broken fences can be mended. would hate to think that broken pieces can move you off your chosen path. being a mathematician, i'd like to think of myself as an addition to the whole...as opposed to subtracting from it. MUCH LUV, MY BRUTHA. WE ARE ONE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Without any doubt ya heard clear and i agree with Baller and add in whole .
     
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